| "Jewel Shard's Bail Bonds" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: inuamante81 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2012 23:50 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please tell me you haven't forgotten this story. It's just getting good. If you have it complete on another website let me know, if not, please update soon. |
Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2009 06:04 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Of course we are ready for the ride. Good to see new chapter for this story. I can't wait to see what happens next; between Kouga, Naraku and Kikyo it definitely looks like it is going to get interesting for everyone. I am glad that Inuyasha has told Kagome at least some of the truth about himself and Kouga is going to be in trouble for not telling her.
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Reviewed By: Lynzi18 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2009 00:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am in lovveee with your story. Its well-written and just lovely to read. Keep up the greeeatt work:D Can't wait to read more of your story.
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Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2009 00:48 EDT
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i havent left you a comment in a while, but thats because you havent updated in a while. dont worry though, im not gonna harp at you. i know why you havent updated and i understand. i thought id just drop by and leave you a little note. i miss this story and honestly im tempted to go back and re-read all the chapters... actually i may do just that, before i read the next chapter, just run back and read the old ones. im sure i could stand for a refresher... anywho, i miss you. hope your beta finishes soon...
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Reviewed By: moonlightsprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2009 10:07 EDT
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OMG ilove your stories!! you have a knack for making peple crazy, you know that?! when i was reading this last installment, i almost cried for kikyo(almost! she's a dirty ho so i didn't) please update latahs
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2009 16:15 EDT
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I just found your story and really like it, when InuYasha had Sessy look for the drug dealer I was sure it was going to be Kouga (I would not put it past him)! Hope Kags finds out the whole story soon!
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Title: Love it!!
Reviewed By: inu - baby [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2009 03:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story so far please update soon!! Also i've been reading your other story (which is also great). Anywho I can't wait!!
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Reviewed By: kagome012 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2009 07:28 EDT
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omfg! Cant stop typing! Sorry babe! But my new Acc, If it works will be called DarkWolveSpirit! So if ya need to contact me, ill be there!
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Reviewed By: kagome012 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2009 07:26 EDT
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SORRY! Should have revised that...>.> I ment "Im now starting my own book" Sorry!
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Title: Ah!!!
Reviewed By: kagome012 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2009 07:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omfg! I started crying when I figured out it wasnt finished. No offence. Im a writer. I used to write fanfiction but I stopped and Im not moving on to my own book. It love hows its turning out. (P.S. Im a fan of finished books, and I would think It would get pissed of I read a whole series and a new book was comeing out in like a year! Lol. Havnt expienced....YET! Lol. Yeah, You need to put your work in tighter paragraphs, and dont be afriad to put saying like "omfg I love you to...bleh bleh bleh" in the paragraph, its completely fine, just only use one voice in a paragraph in a way. But you absoululty wonderful at writing and have a good imagination, I just started getting back on this website today, cause I began to remember it way back when (two to three years ago). But keep up the work, Im here for ya all the way! If ya need any tips Im here always babe!
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2009 21:10 EDT
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I don't usually point out formatting problems, since I know MM often creates them, but since you just reposted chapter one and have found yourself a beta to help with the editing, I figured I should. For some reason every new line that is supposed to start with a quotation mark begins with a lower case letter "g". Also you seem to have lost all of the spacing between paragraphs. My guess is that your editor was using a different font when doing the editing and that might have created the formatting problem when it was uploaded.
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Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2009 04:21 EDT
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oh no, i didnt hate the rin/sess, i appreiciated it for what it was... and it was really cute... did i mention that i love the way you're portraying the original kikyo? well, incase i didnt... i love it... i like the idea that kagome and kikyo arnt really all that different. i mean ofcourse they are to a certain degree but they resemble one another in manner as well as looks... and im loving the kouga bashing... god hes a jackass in this story... now generally im not one for the bashing of kouga. but, you're so good at it. lol. is naraku gonna be in the story? (you dont have to tell me...) oh and you unintentionally gave me a consolation prize... i may have to deal with the rin/sess moments... but youre at least sparing me the kagura/sess moments... because i really really really dont like that pairing... oh, and i had another question... about the beads... does inu yasha know of them? if the original kikyo died before she could give them to him then does he even know about them? and well, if he doesnt then why/how did myoga(sp?)? (again, you dont have to answer that... i would love it if you did, but if it would give something away, then dont...) anywho, i think this is the longest review ive ever written... ever. but i felt especially compliamented(sp?) at being refered to as your "most diligent" reviewer... so i thought id go the extra mile... but like i was saying, great chapter, love the way your mind works, cant wait for the next chapter, update soon!
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Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2009 02:35 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 11 I just love it. I love the little glimpse into Inuyasha and Koga's story. Now all we have to do is ger Inu to open up and tell Kagome about it. Oh, Sesshomaru and Rin their so cute. Hey when will Inu tell Kagome the story of his life and did Koga really kill Kikyo and ..I have so many questions but I see you laughing and shaking your head "You have to keep reading" and I will...Please Please update soon.
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Title: Great work!
Reviewed By: deathlord86 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2009 15:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just read up on your fanfics. I got to say I am big fan already. Ive been reading since both of your fanfics started. Keep up the great work. Deathlord86
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Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2009 21:30 EDT
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simple and sweet, and still not fufilling... but again, thats the point... oh how i hope inu yasha makes a move! and i want kouga to get his ass kicked... i dont ever care who does it... (though it would make me thoroughly happy if it was kagome.) im very impressed with how quickly you get updates out, if makes me happy to see that i have mail, and even more so when i realise its another chapter. infact, im so impressed i wont pester you for a fast update... because i know you will.
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