| "Love and let Lust" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Eluwei [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2009 20:09 CDT
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A few spelling errors, but other wise very good. It's well writen and flows well. Looking forward to more.
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2009 10:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haha, you fixed it in the 3rd chapter, but now it's all squished together in the 4th! It's all good except for one thing that made me laugh...."At least Kagome's man isn't a lecture.".....hahaha.....little oversight, other than that it's coming along great!
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Reviewed By: Death's little Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2009 05:20 CDT
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I love this! Please do continue this it is just awesome.
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Reviewed By: Shaelyn-Bobaelyn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2009 02:58 CDT
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Yes, I have to say i'm sorry for the lack of spaces in the last chapter, I spent a half hour trying to fix it, but it always comes out like that. I'll try to work on it again. Thank you for the support! Like I said, i'm still rusty.
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2009 00:43 CDT
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I am enjoying your story very much, keep up the good work! The only pthing that sort of bugged me is that you had InuYasha toss a potato at Kagome. The potato is a new world food that did not get to Japan till the 1800's and they are in the 1500's (just the other day another story had a potato in it and it sort of breaks the mood). Please keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Darkil [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2009 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great chapter, really want it to continue
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Reviewed By: elementalobsession09 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2009 23:24 CDT
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I'm enjoying this fic so far. I want to see where you take it. Keep it comin'!
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2009 20:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Coming out quite nicely. One of the problems I find with a lot of hentai fics is that they have InuYasha portrayed as some sort of sex fiend just biding his time, but not you! I can definitely sense his reluctance, and your portrayal of his personality is closer to the actually manga than I'm used to any more. Great work, although could you possible put spaces in between the paragraphs in the 3rd chapter? It's kinda hard to read...
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Reviewed By: transatlanticism [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2009 00:15 CDT
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It's coming out so sweetly so far . Can't wait for the next chap. :)
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Title: Darkil
Reviewed By: Darkil [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2009 01:20 CDT
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that was good, needs another chapter, lol
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Title: Me =]
Reviewed By: Shaelyn-Bobaelyn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2009 09:48 CDT
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Alright, thank you, guys! Its the end of the year so I might be a little slow, but i'll try just for my reviewers
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Reviewed By: Darkil [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2009 05:22 CDT
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idk y it posted that 5 times, sry
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Title: Darkil
Reviewed By: Darkil [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2009 05:20 CDT
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me likey, you should continue it, could really feel the heat, LOL
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Reviewed By: arizonasiren [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2009 14:34 CDT
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Good start. Can't wait to see what happens next..Looking forward to next update.
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Reviewed By: taste4inu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2009 08:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it so far! Keep goin pweeze!!
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