| "Demonic Bonds" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Francois75 On: June 21, 2009 08:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Where's the lemon? Lol just playing, this is good keep it up.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Antwone On: June 21, 2009 08:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this is great! This is thekind of story Naruhina deserve! Can't wait for the update!!!
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Reviewed By: Brotter24 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2009 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This looks like a good story so far. The only thing I would suggest would be to break up the large paragraphs a bit to make it easier on people to read. The big block paragraphs can make it hard for some people to follow the story.
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