Reviewed By: fysierm On: August 08, 2010 01:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Normally, I don't read SesshoumaruxRin fics, but the summary was intriguing and there was no posting of the pairing so I just started reading. I was so glad that that I did. You have captured Sesshoumaru's and Rin's essences so well; the characterization is pretty amazing. My only complaint would be that this fic is too short, but since your focus was basically only on Sesshoumaru in the first bit and Rin later, it works. I like how you ended too soon rather than too late, which leads most inevitably to unnecessary drama. It's a nice, (relatively) short fic that is actually probably one of the best I've read in a while. Thank you for writing it!
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