| "Fuyu No Kokoro" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Ditany [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2009 09:53 CST
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Excellent story. At the beginning you said that you received bad comments about Sessoumaru? I can't figure why. This is how you believe he would act in this situation. I still feel bad for Inu Yasha, a wrong choice can really screw up the rest of your life and it's even worse when there is someone there to rub it in your face. Thank you for sharing your work.
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Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2009 00:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ah this was amazing! although it hurt my heart i knew Inuyasha Deserved it! Sesshomaru seeking Justice. Amazing. I also love the quote that you wrote near the ending..about the two wrongs dont make a right? yeah thats a keeper! i love your stories! (i will never get tired of saying that :D
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2009 19:13 CDT
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The first in this was short and sad and this being a sequel is great but I honestly would like to know more of what happens like Inuyasha carrying out his vow to return to the village and tell his children and the village what had happened and to know a bit more of how their punishment is carried out by their own hands. I like the idea that they will be the ones to form their punishment simply by having to face all that has come to light. really well written and enjoyable in it's own rights
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Reviewed By: oniguts On: June 19, 2009 15:30 CDT
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That was awesome! I have always hated the fictions were Kikyo lives happily with Inuyasha while Kagome suffers. I just love that Sessoumaru was seeking justice. To be honest I would love to find out how Inuyasha and Kiyko suffered after the truth came out.
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2009 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...that was far better than I could have ever asked for!!! So rarely do people work up the courage to give InuYasha what he deserves in fics like this, but not you!!! I absolutely loved it, I'd nominate it for an InuYasha Fan Guild Award if I could. As a side note, do you know what I've always secretly thought? Besides the whole 'The same soul cannot exist twice in the same place' rule, I always thought Rin might be a good canidate for another reincarnation between Kikyou and Kagome. Anyway, you really delivered on this one, great work. This is one of those that I'll come back to read again.
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