| "Bound By A Soul" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: KB On: November 14, 2009 23:22 CST
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if i didnt forget my pw I'd be logged in so you could reply but...I LOVED THIS DAMN IT MAKE IT MORE THAN A ONE SHOT *shakes fist* the ending was so...open ended ya know? you WANT MORE. it could go in a he hates her for denying him way or a they make up for it next chapter thing or she's too emberassed to even think about it or or or her mother really knows and confronts her COME ON!!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2009 00:28 CDT
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From the summary, I didn't expect it be a lemonfic. But I'm not complaining. ^_^ I definitely think this should be expanded into at least a two-or-three-shot. Dominant Hiei is always hot, but he was bordering on non-con there. I can definitely see him trying to finish what he started, and I think that can make for some fun situations. But, I can also see him getting thwarted for a while until Kagome is ready to commit to that kind of relationship. Heck, I can see how this would make a great longer fic with him learning more about her and vice versa and their feelings growing all the while as he tries to "seal the deal." LOL!
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Reviewed By: EvilBallOfFluff [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2009 15:31 CDT
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it's very intriguing I would love to see how they met to get up to this point hopefully you do continue : 3
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Reviewed By: AvidRabid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2009 23:39 CDT
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i liked it... and you kinda left it open... for it to be more than just a one-shot... *hint hint*
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