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| "The Burden of Proof" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: Jake Akira On: July 10, 2010 18:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ahh, I think I'm going to cry. Sure that you won't write another chapter? You always mange to make up such interesting pairings, and I just happen to love this one. You would have never thought it would work, but It really does. Please, not even if I beg you? I know you said you wouldn't but I honestly love this pairing, with the Yumichika would does seem like he's gay and Rukia who always gets paired with Ichigo or Renji (although she is getting married to him). Overall, I enjoyed the writing and the plot, and the ideas were very exciting. I love the way you seemed to capture Yumichika's flippant manner and his gestures, while making the story interesting. Keep writing!
| Title: Awwww
Reviewed By: cancerchick16 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2009 01:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww it really upsets me that it was a one shot but it was reallly fun to read. It was nice to get a little background on how this pair came to be. By the way love the way D.C. and F.T.L.O.A.F. is going really waiting for new chaps. Is O.A. at an earlier time than D.C.? I know I am soundin like an obssesed soap fan but cant really help it you are awsome.
| Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2009 18:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I've never read a story or one-shot with these two. I really love Yumichicka so to say I was excited to read this one-shot is an understatement. Awesome job!
| Title: happy and sad ldymoon (nsi)
Reviewed By: ldymoon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2009 17:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
lol, i am happy and sad...this one shot is soooo good i'm going to have to make up my own story in my head now, tho, i would like for you to take that burden away from me. lol. this was sooo good. sooo sooo good. i love it! love it love it love it! i'd like to know if they actually finally get to get together and if Renji can forgive her/but then that's his fault too for making her feel unwanted, but, this was meant to be and Renji will find his mate that was meant for him too I just know it. lol. nah chick you gotta do this story. as an author i understand from your point of view but you gotta do the story please for the fans! lol. love your work regardless.
| Reviewed By: Bastion [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2009 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah! Man I almost missed this one. I was hoping you'd write this oneshot and I for one am happy with just this. When you described how they first met in Different, it just begged special treatment. Great job but when you changed perspectives, you didn't have little dividers like your did the first time and it confused me a few times since you kept switching back and forth and you missed a quote or two on the dialog around the end. Anyway, I like how you built up the relationship between Yumi and Rukia and didn't go the 'love at first sight' routine I see so many times between AU pairings. It was a chance meeting between two people that evolved due to chemistry and an ease in their prescence with each other. Great job, now let's see some more Friend and Different!
| Title: YES!!!!!!
Reviewed By: sheastarr334 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2009 22:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED it!!! OH! It was so funny and cute. I like how it put me where Rukia's heads at. The perfect thing to tide me over til the next chapter of 'Friend' and/or 'Circumstances'. I haven't seen much in the charaterzion of Yumichika. I'm so happy you gave him a personality. If you're still bored, you could do one with the other surprise relationships in your stories. I would love to see where some of them came from. LOL U R AWESOME!!
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