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 Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 03, 2009 21:41 EDT
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Raito is trying so hard to get L that its scaring L. You know what i think will be funny? If some other guy hit on L while Raito is there. That would be so funny. They should go to a club. that would be funny to. any way keep it up love the story.
 Title: Technical Difficulties...
Reviewed By: Passing Reader  On: September 29, 2009 09:38 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I hope this goes through, my internet has been revolting against me ^^' Did I mention that I adore how you portray these guys? I love how they /think/ at each other like the other can hear it XD Maybe you should consider a slave fic with these two next because Ratio's line about L only having his phone when he allowed it sent me off on an imagionation tirade! =D ...That or I need to get a life outside of boyp0rn.....naah (the withdraws are not pritty ;p) Speaking of boy slaves, isen't the new Ai no Kusabi remake out? :/ I would go look myself but it would take me hours (God why?! My internet!!! D:) ~Passing Reader
 Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 25, 2009 19:59 EDT
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thanks for the wornning. i dont get to read as offten but i will be shore to reviwe every time i read. Will L test his theory on if its jus Raito or not that arouse him him i mean? i think tha would be intresting to read.
 Title: woot!
Reviewed By: Passing Reader  On: September 22, 2009 00:40 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Test, essay, homework! Loved chapter, must sleep. Thank u!
 Title: Omg!
Reviewed By: Passing Reader  On: September 15, 2009 10:21 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Did NOT see that last bit coming and just to think of L's reaction if he found that business card instead of a coaster! XD ROUND 2! Lol! I hope L is able to keep enough of his senses to give his own interrogation later, or perhapes do some snooping ;p (naughty) As a side question, where the hell is Watari for all of this? *Deploy protective elderly simi-parental unit* XD I beg you to one day do a scene with Watari giving L "The Talk". I could die happy then, but only because I'd die laughing....or melt from the possible sweetness of it. I'm going to shutup, here's waiting for the next installment! ~Passing Reader
 Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 09, 2009 13:12 EDT
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This story is one of my top favs i cant what to read what happens next.
 Title: Gods I love L's brain XD
Reviewed By: Passing Reader  On: September 08, 2009 23:18 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Okay, this chapter not only balanced out the last one, but it was a whole hell of alot more coherent sice I was awake for it and not dozing off in the middle ^__^' Though even if I had been I probibly would have woken up to my own laughter. I swear I just about died at this sentance- "...maybe thought things at him while he was not able to intercede on his own behalf..." I got to 'thought things at him' and rolled off the bed. By the end of the chapter my stomach hurt (it still makes me giggle) Oh Light you poor parinoid fool, L's ALWAYS thinking things at you, mostly obscenities lol I do hope that Light and Aiber meet! I could just imagine the snob battle that would insue (foul play, black mail, jealosy, my imagination never stops :p) Here's eagerly awaiting for the next chapter, I can't wait(or spell apparently) ^__^' (stupid clumsy fingers!!!) ~Passing Reader
 Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 28, 2009 01:55 EDT
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yay sex! im shore that l wil be freacking out in th morning but hey its sex.
 Title: tired....zzzz...
Reviewed By: Passing Reader  On: August 24, 2009 23:45 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Well I can safely say that I diden't see that coming. I think that I'm so used to L being parinoid about kira, so much so that I forget that this is AU so he dosen't have to be. I'm sorry to make this short (I had to type that 3 times b4 I got it right, ha! ^^') but I just got done with my first day of college so I'm a little drained... I will say this though, I did think that it was maybe a tad OOC of L to jump into bed with Light, though I do belive the AU is to blame for some of the akwardness, I still think he may have been pairinoid over the detective bit, not to mention the previouse "rejected" kiss. ...Don;t mind me too much, I'm not totally with it right now if my typing is any indication, (it took me 4trys to spell is! grrr) I'll come back another time and reread this when I'm less out of it. I may be underestimating L as a charater as well, (for he's not TOTALLY socially inept) Here's going to bed ~Passing Reader
 Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 20, 2009 11:57 EDT
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Aww L is cute. He fell for Light without even knowing it.
 Title: Awww, poor L :(
Reviewed By: Passing Reader  On: August 19, 2009 23:54 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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It never ceases to amaze me how logically stupid Light can be. I find it both amuzing and at times, terribly fustrating ^^' I havta wake up early tommorow so I'm sorry that this is so short. I can't wait to see what happends next! {Though if Light were smart he would have realized his blunder and ran after our dear insomnic. Tch, Geniuses! ;p } ~Passing Reader
 Reviewed By: Deathnotelover  On: August 15, 2009 21:22 EDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
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i liked the how u have L stepping out of his comfort zone and how light just keeps staying one step a head of him. i love the story! keep writing i cant wait for the next chapter!
 Title: Irony :3
Reviewed By: Passing Reader  On: August 12, 2009 23:56 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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I was half expecting L to go up and ask to borrow a pen, much like Light did, and then I began to think of the weird crazy things he would do with said pen....all of which were unlikely and some very much impossable. ---I love Irony, and I do belive Irony loves L. You always seem to have a good bit of it where he is concered, though it mostly manafests as him being a bit of a hypocrite (the whole expanding of the mind); I find it funny as it always with logic that he's able to do a 180 ;p Im looking forward to when L gets some of his own back at Light, (and we all know he will or else he woulden't be much of a challenge ;3) As always, here's waiting for the next chapter, till then! ~Passing Reader ---PS. Is it sad that I liked the Inspector Gadget senerio you painted? lol
 Title: More? Please?
Reviewed By: Passing Reader  On: June 28, 2009 13:26 EDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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If I could write a 110 in enjoyment factor I would :p I now find that I don't want to read anyone elses DN fics but yours! I think I'm even more fascinated with this story than I was with the last one (though both hold a certian charm for me). I love it, plain and simple ;p Thanks to both you and your beta! You guys do magnificent work so please keep it up! As usual you nailed the characters and have captured my heart all over again :D Here's eagerly awaiting the next chapter! ~Passing Reader
 Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 25, 2009 19:15 EDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Frist to reveiw. I win. Ok I'm try to stop being weird. I love this story it's so funny how worked up L got over a pen. He hates loseing huh? I'm not supried that Light could piss him off though. L being social is a weird consept but intertanig. I can't wait to read what happens next.
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