Title: Paragraph's need work
Reviewed By: AMWOOD co [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2009 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Comment/Review:
I will be looking for this story, but there is a simple fix you need to make. Any time that a new character starts speaking, a new paragraph is needed. You have three, four or more characters having speach in a single sentence and that is not proper English. It's a minor thing for correcting, but makes reading a story much easier. From the offices of AMWOOD co
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