"Teacher! Teacher!" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: angelica001 On: October 12, 2010 07:44 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: love it!!!!
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Title: KITTY!!! Reviewed By: blueyedevil586 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2009 19:58 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: HAHAHA! not expecting the end(This kitty is pissed) i thought this was his first time doing it to her total plot twister!! I Loved It!!Gawd I'm such a hentai but this as so goooooooooood!!!! I have got to read the other one you wrote umm. . . the "one your knees your mine bitch" or something but anyways hahaha I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2009 19:04 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That was HILARIOUS! "Kitty is pissed." Your ending lines always get me! I loved the build-up to InuYasha's "plan", too, and can't wait to see what you have in store for the rest of OYK :D
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2009 09:16 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: What happened to Kagome being a hermaphrodite? Don't get me wrong, I liked it, but I thought OYKB was so original in that aspect. Oh well, still very hot...I wonder how the kids managed to paint in the dark?
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Reviewed By: Ai Kisugi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2009 00:59 CDT Comment/Review: Haha! Love it. No pussy time for a month because of what he pulled. Humm...I guess we need a follow up of Kagome dominating him for his misbehavior! That shoudl be fun. :-) Now you still need to finish up the last chapter of OYKB... You don't have much left to do.
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2009 22:39 CDT Comment/Review: *facepalms* So it is the same world. Sorry, didn't see the summary. >
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2009 22:38 CDT Comment/Review: Ha ha, deliciously hawt and naughty, as one could expect from you. Nice ending too. The one detraction is that it's a bit too similar to "On Your Knees", unless it's set in the same universe?
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