| "Lemon Squares" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: WTF!
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2005 23:06 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love the format, but her parents come in to seem them like that! And, 'At least the Lemon Squares are done.' That was a perfect ending.
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 17:47 CST
Comment/Review:
What I want to know is, what are Bulma's parents gonjna think when they see Bulma and Vegeta? |
Reviewed By: ExoticBulma [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2002 15:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
i totally loved that ^^ |
Reviewed By: bura400 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2002 02:48 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! I loved it!!!!!!! *blushes a bright crimson*
Your stories alwayssssssssssss make me blush. >_ |
Reviewed By: Skayda [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2002 05:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this! Great work! Such a cute couple! *hehe!* |
Reviewed By: Astro On: August 25, 2002 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I must have more finish the story soon!!! Please!! |
Reviewed By: Pi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2002 11:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hehe, what a cute and funny story and Vegeta is acting so kawaii! ^-^ I really like the idea! |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2002 19:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BAH. Fanfiction.net ain't working for me. Me have to read and review here. But i'll also review for fanfiction.net.
ME LIKE!!
CONTINUE!! ^^ |
Reviewed By: Duo no Tsuin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2002 19:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Only 2 more chapters + an epilogue?? Unacceptable, I must have more! More more more more MORE!!! ......and some of those lemon squares, lemonade, circular poison that you call raw lemon, and sweet goo that MUST be better than Vegeta's impotent sperm.
0.o *chuckles at her Vegeta-ness* You see what happens when I don't get enough of hormone raging Vegeta good-- or should I say BADness!? I go all crazy and feel like blasting ki ball holes in everything ... *lmao*
Keep up the great work!! ^_^ OH, and could you please email me for an update at duonotsuin@yahoo.com ? Arigatou gozaimasu! :) |
Reviewed By: manga, the Awesome One in pigtails [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2002 07:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, the last line should be "You're getting in too deep with this." but the rest of the story is fine. Funny and cute. :) |
Reviewed By: Ariana [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2002 23:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey! Ariana here! I like your fanfiction so far! I wonder how your gonna tie in the lemon squares....hmmm...lol Anyway, update soon! Oh, and I just wanted to thank you for reviewing my fanfic. It's my first one, and I'm barely getting any reviews! I feel soo pitiful...oh well....(sigh) Anyway, keep up the good work! ciao! |
Reviewed By: bura400 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2002 07:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I like the way this story is going and I love all your fics! ^.^ You are one of my fave authors and I was wondering if I could be on your mailing list. =^.^= My email address is bra400@yahoo.com so drop me a line if you can. Bura400 |
Reviewed By: ME On: July 23, 2002 23:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey! i really like his fic so far and cant wait for u too update, dotn really have iem to go checking the site all the tme to see if u updated, so an u please e-mail me when u update? (beccarll@aol.com) id apreciate it! thanx! and keep up the good work and update soon! |
