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Reviewed By: SammyJams On: December 26, 2016 19:53 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Looked you up after starting to read a new yaoi fic of yours - read
this in a day! I really hope you finish it! I hope Inuyasha gets
the happy ending he deserves. I cried more than once reading this,
lol
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Title: Poison... That bastard.
Reviewed By: CrazyYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2015 23:33 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poison huh... OK... I still think he deserves every scratch he got
for all the other crap he has done to poor Inuyasha. Locking him up
in the castle. The rapes. It's stalkhome syndrome that makes him
start not minding the rapes. He is being strong for his kids who
don't know better. Sess still has not apologized for all his crap.
He is just being all nice nice and giving gifts instead of doing
the thing he should. Let Inuyasha free. Let him go see shipo of
kouga on his own. He needs time to heal damn it.
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Title: that bastard!
Reviewed By: CrasyYasha On: September 12, 2015 04:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh! He knew that would happen earlier! Tried a preemptive calming
with an awesome fuck! And an offer of getting out of the castle!
That BASTARD! KILL THE BITCH WHILE SHE RIDES HIM COVERING
SESSHOMARU IN HER BLOOD THEN FLIP SESS OVER AND FUCK HIM! Be cruel
like he was! No prep like the first two times! Ruin him! Then grab
the kids and go! Lord of the lands needs punishment! Gah!
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Title: UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: ladytokyo aka Shivonne On: September 04, 2011 11:52 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I always love to come back a re-read this fic please update soon!!!!!!!!!! I would like to see if Inuyasha and Sesshomaru evolve. |
Title: Konnichiwa
Reviewed By: LinaelAeonsky [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2011 22:04 PDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't mind the "ew"s & "gross"- Author-san. Life is a whole journey of learning. I enjoyed your fic. Just a little stumbled grammar here and there, not ones that you can't improve. Good job. . . |
Title: Good Job
Reviewed By: jdbbrz [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2010 16:42 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awesome I love it when you write about his deliveries and the fact that Sesshomaru was finally there during this one and actually helping was awesome. I knew he was having twins but poor sweet Inuyasha goes through so much and his mate is a total complete jerk I tell you Sesshomaru is enough to make me so mad especially since he won't even give poor Inuyasha a break and let him leave that damn castle no wonder he feels like he's in a prison anyone would I can't wait to see where else this goes I hope Inuyasha gets a little happiness soon he's breaking my heart. I'll be waiting for the next update.
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Reviewed By: kale251 On: October 01, 2010 23:01 PDT
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thanks for the update. I kinda understand why you showed this birth in the story. Sess knew Inu had his pups but it was sort of in the back of his head. Seeing it he can't ignore just how much Inu has gone through to give him pups. Hopefully he'll respect him for it.
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Reviewed By: Josilin Stafford On: September 30, 2010 22:39 PDT
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I hope you will be writing more chapters soon> I really like this particular story
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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2010 14:27 PDT
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Awww there geting someware. Now all Sesshoumaru has to do is lern to talk and things would get even better. This is a good story just love it.
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Reviewed By: vampress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2010 03:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very entertaining lots of drama & angust. Our poor hero left 1 hell with kahoemay to his brother, quite the distresses hanyou. Hope you plan on updating soon or finishing the story soon.
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Title: In Hopes For A Bright Inu-Future
Reviewed By: komotumushi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2010 08:41 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read and re-read your story several times and I must say, I do enjoy it so. I hope you update it soon, but I will not rush you, as in turn, it is your story. However, I must say that I cry everytime I read it, as Inuyasha seems to be more and more dejected. I fear for the first time, I am actually so engrossed in a story that I find little time to read others. I have tried, but it feels as if I am betraying this story when I read. It is an overall great story to begin with. Inuyasha and Sesshomaru are always my favorite pair. However, it would seem more fitting for Sesshomaru to finally get a bit in the mouth so he can be reigned in. Poor Inuyasha is all but a shell of his former self and I do hope in time, that fire within him will burn brighter than ever before,(and here is to hope) finally bite Sesshomaru in the butt. Tai-youkai or not, no mate should be left to rott in their own self-loathing. If it were up to me, Sesshomaru would be left alone, cold, and broken, realizing in the end what he had done was wrong and that Inuyasha was speacial. However, SHAME ON YOU for making Inuyasha believe in the words of a foul mouthed Inu-youkai woman who, in truth, didn't deserve to be who she was. Boy, do I hate Sesshomaru's mother. Not only that, you are slowly making me have a loath-love relationship towards my Sesshomaru costume, as I play Sesshomaru at almost every cosplay-con I can. Opps, I am rambling again. Your story has many elements I enjoy exploring in the depths of my mind and I do hope, in time, that these dark clouds will soon pass over and Inuyasha will once more have a smile. Your's Truley Komo of the Fox Tribe
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Title: KAT
Reviewed By: Shivonne aka ladytokyo On: June 12, 2010 03:26 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon I want to know if life gets better with Sesshomaru. now that my whining is out of the way how are you doing? Whats going on with you hope you are having a good summer so far.
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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2010 20:42 PDT
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the ending was very lovely. love the story.
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2010 14:57 PDT
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Another extraordinary chapter. Poor Inu it seems like he has given up (there seems to be no fight left in him)- I hope it is just the pregnancy and that once he pops he will get a little bit of his old spunk back. Sess really seems to be trying hard, but as far as I can tell he really has not done anything to warrant Inu's forgiveness (an evening of decent behavior does not count for much), he has tied Inu down to a life as a breeder (just like a puppy mill) and taken away his freedom. Inu was brash, loved the outdoors and loved to fight, he has not been able to indulge in anything he likes (other than being with his children)for years. Sess better start thinking of ways to make Inu truly happy and also find a way to keep Inu from becoming pregnant every time he goes into heat, otherwise there will eventually be hundreds of puppies running around the castle! I really do not see how much longer Inu can last in his perpetual state of melancholia. I also hope you start to reverse some of Inu's forced feminization, I think that once he can act a little more like a man he will start to feel better!
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Reviewed By: biglaugher113 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2010 21:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im not usually a Pov reader (seriously i hate those fics) but yours is just wonderful. you write it so that it is so interesting. Please update soon im looking forward to the next chapter.
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