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Reviewed By: Manda001 On: March 19, 2010 23:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah! Again, I light up when I see a new update!! I did like this chap, glad you didn't delete it, and I think it's a nice little slice of daily life. I'm dying inside for Inu, and wanting to beat the crap out of your Sesshomaru (but isn't that the natural way?). It's killing me that Inu seems kinda broken, not the fighter anymore, but I respect your vision. Please keep writing! This premise and narrative style is great!
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Title: I'm ready to see the up side just any time now lol
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: March 19, 2010 23:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I ended up reading this one a whim and rather enjoyed it. As always there is the expected angst, but you make it the plot for this story, which, while interesting, has me crying for Inuyasha lol. Sesshomaru is an asshole, I have no idea how your going to have him make it up to our poor Inu, so I wish you the best of luck in that regard *laughs* It does seem that his oldest son maybe catching on as well, and I have to wonder what his reaction will be should he get involved! This has been a very interesting read and I look forward to more so please continue to share! Here's waiting for the next chapter! ~Passing Reader
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Reviewed By: kale [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2010 18:57 PDT
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YA! Update! Everytime I read this I just feel so sorry for Inuyasha. He loses Kagome, he feels he'll never have children then, bam!, Sesshomaru. Then he adjusts to having a son, lives his life well enough then, bam!, Sesshomaru again. Then all the peace he's had is just gone, he locked away, cooped up, and forced to stay with someone who, while they are related, don't know one another. So essentially he's now in a loveless marriage. Sad.
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Reviewed By: Toni (anf600) On: March 19, 2010 17:47 PDT
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Poor Inu - I feel so bad for him. Constant pregnancy can't be good for him especially when he is so depressed. When will Sess stop being an ass and start paying real attention to Inu??
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Reviewed By: CrazyYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2010 00:42 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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Ok. i've had dreams that i got a new chapter for this fic. and finally my dreams have come true! Oh ok. talking is good. explaining why your unhappy is good. Things can start to get better now. and maybe a visit from shipo will help. or, oh want InuYasha to be happy again. but know with so much pain and hurt that he has gone threw it will take time. Yay for open minded deamons accepting slight human blood. I know since you just updated tonight i'll have a long wait agian till the next instalment. but looking forward to it. happy fan. CrazyYasha.
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Reviewed By: WhinnieRichards On: March 04, 2010 02:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
True, it is getting dark but that is exactly what makes this story so beautiful. I'm usually not a fan of angst but you created it so wonderfully that I've just become completely caught up in the story. Great Job.
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Reviewed By: CrazyYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2010 17:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
at first i hated you for makeing inuyasha a transvestite. but you wrote your story so well. even though i was screaming at the screan that i didn't like you... i couldn't stop reading.. and now that i've calmed down after a few chapers and have gotten the idea wraped around my head that this 'could' happon. i started to enjoy the story more and more.. now i'm so attached i need to know what happons next. i love the story. and hope with due time and undersandable awequardness. inuyasha and sesshomaru and learn to not be so agrivating to eachother. and maybe the son can help be the go between, litening and saying the words they need to say to eachother until they finally get the courage and say those things themseves. and the next heat can be enjoyable. i'm just hoping. i'm interested what will happon next. and loveing every sentence. looking forward to where your going to take it. new fan. CrazyYasha
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2010 15:34 PST
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Sorry no words - too upset - Inu pregnant again!
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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: February 25, 2010 08:17 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I am so sad and angry all at the same time. Sad because Inuyasha is loosing everything that makes him the wild, caring, strong, loyal, and awesome person he is. I'm angry because of Sesshoumaru. IF (and I am waffling if I believe it or not) he cares about Inuyasha, he is sure showing it in a craptastic way. If he cares as much as Ai is leading us (not inu) to believe, then he needs to tell INUYASHA. I could just stomp on his foot. I keep trying to tell myself that perhaps the tea was dangerous for Inuyasha or something like that and Sess was trying to help him. BUT HE ISN'T. GRRRR. All in all, I really am enjoying this piece because it it making me go through a whole range of emotions in so little time. Huzzah!
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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2010 07:59 PST
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thats really depressing. Sesshoumaru need to do something qiukly before InuYasha is broken beyond repare. dont get me wronge i love the story. the realisticness is scary but that is also why i love it.
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Reviewed By: anf600 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2010 05:37 PST
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okay you brought tears to my eyes again - which isn't good cause I am reading this before I have to leave for work and be late...... *sniff* Luv the angst tho!!! SOOOOO GOOOOOD
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Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2010 21:05 PST
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Was not expecting such an intense convalescence 6 months! Hope Sess gets his act together soon!
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Reviewed By: Rissa On: February 16, 2010 17:49 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I kinda lie the turn this is taking and I can't wait to see where it goes ^-^
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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: February 16, 2010 12:09 PST
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This chapter broke my heart. Inu has lost 6 months of his daughter's life, of his son's life, of his own life all because of Sess. You Sess makes me want to growl. If 6mo of coma isn't enough to start the change in him, I don't know what will. grrrr. Thanks for writing this for us. (looking forward to future chapters, though)
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Reviewed By: Winter235 On: February 11, 2010 15:07 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter makes me so sad! I like your style and the plot line, please keep going! But, not trying to influence the author, can you give the inu family a little bit of happiness?
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