| "A Western lands tale" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: misato_1471 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2010 20:54 CDT
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hey I just read your story and it's very interesting. will you be adding any new chapters soon? i'd like to see what'll happen to poor jaken! lol
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Title: more ideas
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru-Sama2 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2009 12:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooh, oooooooooh! i know what you should do, make jaken become handservant to RIN! Yay! ^_^
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Title: ideas
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru-Sama2 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2009 12:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think that you should have sesshomaru beat jaken to unconciousness, prepare to kill him with dragon strike, then have rin stop him somehow, telling him to not kill him, just to give him harsh punishment, something like an akward situation for jaken. hee hee hee, im an evil genius ^_^
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Reviewed By: KuroKiku [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2009 15:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the concept of the story. The only complaints I would have are that sometimes the style seems rushed, like a lot of things are explained just to get past them. This is something I struggle with too. Otherwise, keep at it! I'd love it if you'd read my fic as well, since I'm also a first-timer. It's Naruto, so I hope you don't mind. (The Shinobi and the Miko.) Keep it up! ~Kurokiku
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Reviewed By: Inu_inu_luvluv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2009 07:07 CDT
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pickled radish?! with peanut butter?!?! ...*ewwww* nice one!^^ i can't help but wait to read about the mating season, this should be hilarious XXD!! good work,hon, keep it up!
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Reviewed By: inyashafan2009 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2009 06:41 CDT
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hey u got me hooked. i am really liking ytour story. i usually do not leave reviews so you are lucky. i am writing this review to tell you 2 keep writing this story. i would love to know how it ends. thank and good luck.
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Reviewed By: Inu_inu_luvluv [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2009 08:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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i really like this story! it's interesting and light to read since the trials set aren't so... angsty ^^ buuuuuuuut!!! i think you should get yourself a beta. (no offense ofcourse) i think you've been writing these so hastily you didn't notice some mistakes and we all know how blind one can become to one's own mistakes.^^ good work though!! keep posting, i'm waiting.
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