| "Truth, Dare, Double Dare, Promise to Repeat" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: xFinalActsGirlx On: April 24, 2012 02:32 EDT
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I absolutely love this! When Sesshomaru showed up I died! This is so great, hopefully Kouga will gain some morals -.- that stupid guy XD |
Reviewed By: lettheinkbleed [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2012 04:16 EDT
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AH! I love it! Please keep updating! I've read a few truth or dare inuyasha fanfics and so far yours is my favorite!! |
Reviewed By: Ocelot 125 On: April 11, 2012 22:14 EDT
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Apologies, I actually thought the computer was kicking me out and not allowing my post to go through. I didn't check. Sorry everyone! |
Reviewed By: Ocelot 125 On: April 11, 2012 22:13 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I have read a lot of Inuyasha fanfics, even those who have tried to write a truth or dare and yes truth dare double dare promise to repeat. After reading yours I only have one thing to say...This one is awesome! You are the first one that is believable and stays true to all of the characters. Now I think Seshomaru here is a bit of a stretch, but I'll reserve judgment. All of the others had Inuyasha singing "I'm a barbie girl" or some other songs that even if Kagome taught them to him, he wouldn't be caught dead in them. Or they bring Seshomaru in as a drunk person. There are some really weird ones out there. I just had to complement you on creating a realistic fanfic for this. I can really see this happening, not in the final act, but maybe somewhere just before Mount Hakurei...or after Kikiyo is brought back. Thank you for writing. For a technical assesment, no grammar errors, I didn't see anything too out of character, and you have a fun writing style. I always laugh when I read this (Miroku you bring it all on yourself). Please keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Ocelot 125 On: April 11, 2012 22:12 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I have read a lot of Inuyasha fanfics, even those who have tried to write a truth or dare and yes truth dare double dare promise to repeat. After reading yours I only have one thing to say...This one is awesome! You are the first one that is believable and stays true to all of the characters. Now I think Seshomaru here is a bit of a stretch, but I'll reserve judgment. All of the others had Inuyasha singing "I'm a barbie girl" or some other songs that even if Kagome taught them to him, he wouldn't be caught dead in them. Or they bring Seshomaru in as a drunk person. There are some really weird ones out there. I just had to complement you on creating a realistic fanfic for this. I can really see this happening, not in the final act, but maybe somewhere just before Mount Hakurei...or after Kikiyo is brought back. Thank you for writing. For a technical assesment, no grammar errors, I didn't see anything too out of character, and you have a fun writing style. I always laugh when I read this (Miroku you bring it all on yourself). Please keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Ocelot 125 On: April 11, 2012 22:01 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I have read a lot of Inuyasha fanfictions that have attempted to write a story with the gang playing truth or dare, even truth dare double dare promise to repeat and I only have one thing to say...This one is awesome! This is the first one that I feel has an actual story and stays real to all of the characters. For me Seshomaru is a bit of a stretch, but I'll wait and see. This one is fun and I could see this happening maybe not in the final act but definitely the last part of Inuyasha. I just had to compliment you, considering that in the others I have read, they have Inuyasha singing "I'm a barbie girl" or some other stuff that just wouldn't happen, even if Kagome taught him the songs. I thank you for writing. For technical stuff, I saw no grammar errors and your writing style is easily understood. I always laugh when I read your story(Miroku you bring it on yourself). Please keep it up! |
Reviewed By: bks/ animfan_7@hotmail.com On: April 09, 2012 03:27 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic. i was so dissaponted when you put it on hold. why did you have them not kiss. that would have been so cool |
Reviewed By: bks On: December 17, 2011 14:45 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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will there be more? |
Reviewed By: animfan_7@hotmail.com On: January 13, 2011 18:33 EST
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i love your story when are you updating |
Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2011 16:30 EST
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I think Kagome dared Miroku to dare Kouga to do something! And isn't Rin a little young to be playing this game? Oh well. I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon please!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Cricket42(not signed in) On: December 28, 2010 02:27 EST
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made me laugh keep it up and please dont make me want so long i've been a very good girl this year. |
Reviewed By: Otakumom2 On: November 01, 2010 05:05 EDT
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The water buffalo song!? my son used to love that one! the hairbrush song too. My daughter used to like the Dance of the cucumber one. They STILL joke about how a tomato could hold a newspaper.:)
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Reviewed By: leahstarlhart On: October 14, 2010 02:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just want to start off by saying I almost never review on this sight because I find the process a royal pain. That said, I hope that you continue on with this story as I find it moat enjoyable. I love how yash is messing with koga's head and how he was able to show Kags just what a total bastard moha is.
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Reviewed By: angelica001 On: October 11, 2010 07:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so sooo so beautiful, i luv this fic !!!! please continue...
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Reviewed By: i love kouga [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2010 00:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg please update soon.. I LOVE THIS fic please keep it going.
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