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| "Dragon Ex Machina" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: KT On: May 10, 2013 12:59 EDT
Comment/Review:
I just wanted to let you know the story touched my heart. It was beautiful and wonderfully written. Thank you so much! :) | Reviewed By: SP On: April 28, 2010 20:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful! I've read and enjoyed other PSOH continuation fic, but none of them really explored the characters' intentions like you did here. I especially like the compare-and-contrast of Leon and Taizu. I rather like your explanation :) Thanks for sharing!
| Title: Brilliant!
Reviewed By: J Luc Pitard [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2009 18:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very well done. Tiny, minuscule points off for use of Japanese where English would do (no complaints where it is called for in the story, like when Leon uses -san correctly or with the landlord's son, etc.) The lemon was well worth waiting for and I liked the exchange of "top" and "bottom" between them without concern.
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