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"Power and Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 1 ]
 Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 05, 2009 22:50 CDT
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Very interesting! The conversation going on inside him definitely reveals his character. My only suggestion would be to maybe put the Kyubbi's thoughts and reaction in italics to set them apart. It's nice to think that Naruto had such thoughts and deliberation about his own strength.

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