| "Wonderfully Imperfect" Reviews/Comments [ 54 ] |
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Reviewed By: Katrina Precious On: July 19, 2009 06:27 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can't help but laugh. yes, their meeting was great. u did more than i expected.
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Reviewed By: tomcruise On: July 19, 2009 06:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is good. i swear! i love it. the conversations are really funny..
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Reviewed By: Taranee On: July 19, 2009 05:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really good. i was laughing so hard. update soon okay?
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Reviewed By: yashandkag4ever (not logged-in) On: July 18, 2009 19:57 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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whoa, this is good. i really like it. i read the whole thing in one sitting. you know, all you have so far. i especially liked when yash's dad asked sessh and rin "busy with what?" and sessh was like "producing another kichi, right sweetie?" i loved it. i like how you've made sessh in this. and how he was like "no one ever asks me that" and the way he answered when yash asked how he's been. very good. i want more. update soon please.
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Title: wonderful!
Reviewed By: KagomeInuyasha4ever On: July 17, 2009 04:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you updated a lot of chapters but i just couldn't get enough. i'll be waiting for the rest though.
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: 'Christine' On: July 17, 2009 04:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love about the differences about their families. conversations are good. i'm waiting for what Naraku would actually do.
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Reviewed By: Jheirc On: July 17, 2009 04:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have done an immensely wonderful job. although i hope they would meet soon.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2009 05:12 EDT
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if someone told me, that you run my life... they would get a backhand
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2009 08:35 EDT
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interesting =)
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