"Wonderfully Imperfect" Reviews/Comments [ 54 ] |
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Reviewed By: IrisAyame [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2011 10:04 EDT Comment/Review: Oooh! I like your story! Please, update! It's wonderful! You stopped writing it almost for one year, but it's really hard for me to think you won't write it till the end! This story is really great and you shouldn't stop it there!!! |
Reviewed By: mae_may On: June 17, 2010 19:08 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: AMAZING! ^_^ I couldn't stop reading till Chap 10 and now I'm yearning for more! Please update asap once you're free from your studies!I wish you All The Best in All That You Do! ^_^
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Reviewed By: kagome 434 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2010 10:55 EDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Good Job keep up the good work i cant wait for the next chapter. :)
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Reviewed By: Shaelyn Bobaelyn On: May 10, 2010 16:57 EDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Add meee!!! I want to make this more perfect than it already is!
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Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2010 17:31 EDT Comment/Review: The last line was really cute! Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Inuyasha Baby_bre [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2010 17:18 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Oooo i like this story so much i hope that u update very soon
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Reviewed By: ShaelynBobaelyn loggedout On: April 21, 2010 21:33 EDT Comment/Review: Add me up! Shaelynbayduza@hotmail.com :D
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Title: Hey. Reviewed By: figarra0217 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2010 01:40 EDT Comment/Review: Miss Shaelyn! That would be great! How can we talk besides this way?XD
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Reviewed By: Shaelyn-Bobaelyn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2010 01:21 EDT Comment/Review: I'll be your beta if you'd like. :) For as long as you'd like me. Im pregnant and don't have much to do, personally, and I live to correct people. Pleaseeee.
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Title: Yay! Reviewed By: drkvampress161 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2010 00:14 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Oh my, this is fantastic. I enjoyed seeing Kagome and Inuyasha's parents stories, I think it definately helped show why the characters are acting the way they are. Sesshoumaru is very OOC, but I'm usually pretty okay with that when it's AU because if you don't have his mother and dad die and have him blame/hate InuYasha, then there's no real reason for his characteristics to be the same. I love the way you make InuYasha talk, it's very close to how I think InuYasha would talk in modern day whole being a prominent member of society. I'm enjoying this immensely. By the way, I may have missed this but do you have a beta? I know that when I write I miss a thousand things even when I read the story 10x over. Please continue writing, I think that this story has great potential once it really gets rolling.
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Reviewed By: Shaelyn-Bobaelyn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2010 02:26 EDT Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: YES YES ENCORE, I wish there was a little more detail in newest work but I LOVE the story line! Absolutely entertaining! Thank you so much for updating I didn't think it'd happen!!! :)
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Reviewed By: Inu_Yokai [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2010 19:03 EDT Comment/Review: Uhm...very detailed =) update soon!
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Reviewed By: OMFG I LOVE IT! On: March 28, 2010 12:33 EDT Comment/Review: That was sooo hot! i loved it! MORE MORE! you areah-mazeing
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Reviewed By: loyal reader On: March 25, 2010 18:52 EDT Comment/Review: ooooooooohhhhhh my fucking god more!
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Reviewed By: inu-kags4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2010 17:44 EDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: EEEEPPPPP!!! thank you so much for the update :) i loved it! please keep up the awesome work :)
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