| "Something About Him" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2010 14:55 CST
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Im still a reader my bloved ather ^-^. lol. I cought up to your corrent chapter. I love the story but please don't brake Jason. Katan is still super awsome and I just love him. Qeution, can slaves love get married or something? it waould mack seince but it would suck. ill try to keep up so i can tell you what i think.
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Reviewed By: Caysuna [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2010 14:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is becoming very intriguing... more and more in fact. The characters are becoming increasingly interesting... I look forward to the next update ^.^
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Reviewed By: AngelicDevil [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2009 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
words elude me except for the fact that i'm in love with it!!!!!!!!!!!! =)
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Title: Amazing!!!!!!
Reviewed By: yuukichan101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2009 18:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh wow this is the best fanfic i've ever read. it is absolutly amamzing! *hence the title* i was looking online for something fun to read and then this :D i'm so awed over totally looking forward to the next chapter :)
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Title: Fantasic!!
Reviewed By: Caysuna [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2009 02:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*comes out of the shadows XD* This, is by far the BEST original Yaoi story I have read online!! I can't wait to see the next update! *Yea I was one of the hidden stalkers XD*
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Reviewed By: Maiden's Slave [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2009 13:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I just read your stpry today, and i'm in locve with it. Now i'm waiting for the next chapter and i'm so excited. Your story has brought many ideas to my brain. My way of writing and telling is a story is, me trying to get to the point as fast as possible. Where you take the time and let the story unfold very slowly. I envy you!!!
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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2009 18:36 CDT
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Wow Yuli had a hell of a beating. So aare we geting in to the mager plot. I feel drama coming alonge. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2009 20:58 CDT
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Awww Katan worried. Jason stubran he might supries her. n thanks for the words of wisdom. n i hop you work out the kinks of your story soon
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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2009 13:12 CDT
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chapter14- Jason needs to lern a batter stress relife. chapter15- i feel bad for jason i hom that lady isn't too hard on him. katan had it rufe though. thanks for the tid bit on katan'sw past it helps me understand him a littal more. if you keep updateing this story once a week i wouldn't mine you haveing another story out. im try to keep up but i just started college and its a pain. but ill always revew when i read. ^-^
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Reviewed By: Deangelised [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2009 15:19 CDT
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Raythe moved his rook, and reached out to massage the back of Jason's neck as Katan made his move." Extra quotation mark! Haha, twas so funny when Jason got checked out! And oh dear, getting compared to a dog like that...hahaha for a moment there Jason sounded bipolar with his sudden mood swing, and I guess he really frayed Katan's nerves hahaha, but I still love Katan *hearts*. ^___^ I wonder how he's going to get out of this one now. Oh! And idk why but I never imagined Raythe to be such a character! I was imagining him more...of the mischievous type I guess, someone with a sharper personality and an edge..*shrugs*
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Title: =3 Hawt chapter
Reviewed By: Deangelised [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2009 17:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Overpowered is one word dearie, and hahahaha I quite enjoyed this but god, you make me feel so sadistic hahaha. I fuckin' loved Katan in this chapter, hahaha the sadism ! Oh my *hearts*. And this chapter was quite hot to boot too =3. And I laughed again reading about training Jason using chocolate as a reward hahaha poor soul *hearts*. Poor Jason, he has all the right to being nervous and, I can barely wait to read about this new character *__*. OMGGG. God my mind has been going so wild lately, I'm already having a LOT of different scenarios .> Awwwwww.
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Title: Epic lulz =p
Reviewed By: Deangelised [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2009 16:57 CDT
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LMAOOOOOO ! LOLOL *heaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarts* That was fucking HILARIOUS and omggggggggggg I FEEL for him! I'm a glutton myself! And food is one thing you CAN bribe me with, in fact my friends did try to bribe me with lollipops to go on a trip with them before haha. Oh god I'm so glad I can read your fics again *hearts*. But honestly I was surprised Katan tried to go along with the bribe bit ! But Mark...? Omg hahahaha. Oh and btw, you did a typo in the author's notes bit =p. "youR ought".
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Reviewed By: VegoSacomoto [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2009 22:16 CDT
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Oh my goodness this was the best four chepters ever. and i dont think you can mack Katan dark enugh that i wont like him but if you do ill let you know. i cant whait till thay have sex.
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Title: Gomeneeee
Reviewed By: Deangelised [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2009 09:48 CDT
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OH and btw! I forgot! Did you say THAT THEY'RE GOING TO REMAKE IT?!!!!! FFS. PURE EPICNESS *HEAAARTS* *_____* Omgggg. I can BARELY wait until I get to see that ! Where did you read about that?! Oh and...I'm traveling abroad for a week so I'm going to miss your next update =(. But oh well...I guess that's more for me to read!
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Title: =] Hilarious chapters!
Reviewed By: Deangelised [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2009 13:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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LOOOOOL. Omg. These chapters prolly cracked me up more than they should have, but I was laughing SO hard, it's kinda like Tom and Jerry in a way, omg *hearts*. And well, if you say so! I'm glad you understand my distaste for OOC characters but some characters simply should never be changed! And I guess I'll look it up then, and TY I'd love it if you posted the link for us then! Back to your chapters *hearts*. You know the bit where Katan says Jason WANTS to be treated like a child and actually SPANKED him? Omg that was so freakin' funny...and I'm not really into spanking especially over the lap but that was kinda hot LOL. Hahaha *hearts* Katan isn't the only one being 'unhealthy'. x3 =] Looking forward to reading more! Although I think I won't be having internet access for the next week so...=(.
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