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| "Hybrid Host Club" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Title: A pleasant surprise
Reviewed By: Naruto-Kit On: August 23, 2013 19:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't been on MM.org in a long time and was surprised to happen on this story on the first page. I gave up on most Naruto fics because of their repetitive OOC roles, lackluster stories, and all-around self-serving Mary-Sues. This one, however, makes me think there are still good writers out there somewhere. I look forward to you updating it soon, as well as the conclusion. The overall rating is a 10+, though I noticed a few hiccups in spelling/grammar and perhaps over-use of key words. Then again, this isn't some grandiose novel, it's a story that you're writing for pure enjoyment :) Hopefully, you will take this as somewhat of a encouraging critique (I blame my ex, the English Major lol) and will continue writing this wonderful story. You definitely put time and care into it. I'm also hoping to find more stories you've written, because I really do enjoy your writing style. Well, I seem to have taken up enough space in the review page. Please update soon, because I can't wait to read more into the plot and see the character development. Thank you so much for writing this! (Oh and sorry if the nickname is a little pretentious, considering this is a Naruto fanfic. I got called it a lot when I got my Kyuubi Seal Tattoo. Completely regret it now lol) Thanks again...(ugh wallo'text) | Reviewed By: Anon~ On: August 17, 2012 22:34 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I was surprised when I saw this updated. I might have to read it from the beginning to remember everything. Haha. Does this mean you'll be continuing now? I'm excited! This site has been dead. | Reviewed By: Uke On: July 22, 2010 08:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINALLY! an update! thank you so much. i thought i would never see more of this story.. maah~ i think its adorable how naruto and sasuke continue to dance around eachother, as you put it. its very realistic. i dont really imagine them as being the types to throw themselves at eachother like in some fics. PS. naruto as a fox.. -giggles like a schoolgirl- ..... -blushes darkly and covers his mouth, embarrassed by the sound-
| Reviewed By: iiZeeEpic On: April 23, 2010 11:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ive read this about... 6 times now and im impaitent for the next chapters Q~Q please write !! i love this story dearly
| Title: Awesome~!
Reviewed By: KaitouRyuki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2010 00:26 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm surprised that no one has left a comment yet, wonder why? It's a really interesting story and it peaks my interest when I read it. I'm really glad that you updated the story after such a long wait~! Keep it up~ can't wait to see what happens next~!
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