| "When Angels Fall" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Fnick On: June 10, 2010 23:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Up date soon. It's been to long.
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Reviewed By: thepam On: November 28, 2009 16:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really love this. can't wait for the new chapter.
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Reviewed By: flytrap-heaven On: November 28, 2009 16:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please up date soon. i really love this story. but i hope bella and edward get back together. i get sad when they're apart.
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Reviewed By: plum48 On: November 28, 2009 16:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO!!! please don't end the chapter there. i to excited to wait for the next. i'm INSANE!!!
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Reviewed By: plum48 On: November 28, 2009 16:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO!!! please don't end the chapter there. i to excited to wait for the next. i'm INSANE!!!
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Reviewed By: callesto On: November 28, 2009 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
man. i don't like it when bella hates edward. (no afence to your writing) i love it when they love each other. hope they work things out. i LOVE them. and your story.
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Reviewed By: sumomo48 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2009 15:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aw. no Bella and Edward are fighting. i hope things work out for them. i love it. please up date A.S.A.H.P. (as soon as humanly possible)
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Reviewed By: sumomo48 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2009 01:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME! I really love it. it's cute. Edward and Bella are so right for each other. I hope their parents take this well. I mean, it's not like they're completely related. PLEASE up date soon. I love this. write more A.S.A.H.P. (as soon as humanly possible)
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Reviewed By: callesto On: November 27, 2009 00:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it. it's not everyday you see someone make a story like this. up date soon please.
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Reviewed By: flytrap-heaven On: November 27, 2009 00:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg. that is completely kawaii. i really enjoy reading this. the whole edward and bella being siblings is a real twist. i REALLY love it.
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Reviewed By: plum48 On: November 27, 2009 00:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. that was completely the opposite of what i normaly read. i really like it. hope you update soon. i love it.
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Reviewed By: thepam On: November 27, 2009 00:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i haven't read a twilight fic like this before. i really enjoyed it. i'm a crazy twilight fan. please write a full on, hot, sexy, lemon please. for me. i really hope you update soon. VERY soon.
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Reviewed By: doggies [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2009 10:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
good... but different... I enjoy it... but the back of my mind asks if I should enjoy it... lol... I have a half brother and I would never imagine this... ^-^;
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Reviewed By: TennisManager09 On: August 11, 2009 10:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fic. It's quite different from what I usually read, but being the crazy Twilight fan that I am, I gave it a shot, and I'm glad that I did. Keep writing!!!!!! :)
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