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| "Predatory" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: Krystina On: January 03, 2010 23:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the story, very good job of keeping the characters in character.
| Reviewed By: Krystina On: January 03, 2010 23:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that you portrayed all of them in character really well, I enjoyed reading it.
| Reviewed By: Lollie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2009 11:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! I loved it! What a unique few on the Briefs family. I only wish you would have made it longer. Hope you decided to write more DBZ fanfictions in the future. Love your writing style.
| Reviewed By: Ebonystar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2009 15:42 CDT
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Very dark, very creepy, very unique. It made me cringe yet caught my attention to the very last sentence. "Are you cold mama?" Brilliant! It was as if my head cued in the high pitched violins and the instant fade to black. Who knew little Trunks could carry that weight of psychosis, still be cute and adorable, and remain in character? Bravo. To me it can foreshadow both timelines that Trunks is involved. The 'Future Trunks' seems to be the most likely one, but it can also explain why Trunks is..., please excuse me on my choice of words, a bit of 'a little shit' when younger in the 'main' time line. And yea, I think Vegeta would have been that crude during the early years, until he came to some sort of enlightenment about fathers, or not. I guess we'll never know. Great characterization. Great idea. Love it.
| Reviewed By: Cellar_Door [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2009 17:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great, really enjoyable! Although I don't think Vegeta is that heartless, still very wonderful!
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