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| "Never Melt Ice" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: mooncatz [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2002 03:45 CDT
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'tis a great story, i'll be waiting for the next chapter. ^_^
*mooncatz* | Reviewed By: Vegetas Gyal [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2002 17:34 CDT
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I'm ba-ack!! *grins* Camp was awesome... but I'll tell you about that later.
That chapter was amazing. And I really liked the ending sentence:
"I said no."
That was a perfect ending! This story is coming along awesome! Great work, erie!
And now a little side-note to jay:
First of all, what's a "faget"? I THINK you mean "faggot", and how is someone gay just because you don't like their fic? If you're going to flame somebody, learn how to spell. "Fuck" is also not required five times in each sentence.
And who said that this story was about "vampiers" whatever those are. I think the word you're looking for is "vampire". And "maiting rituals"... I think you mean "mating rituals", right? And who said that's what this story's about?
Not everyone likes reading and writing stories about horny teenagers. If that's what you're interested in, than YOU write a fic like that, and we'll see how many reviews you get. Don't order fantastic authors to write about a crappy, over-used topic.
And, jay, if you disliked this story so much, why did you give it a 7/10 for Overall Rating and a 5/10 in Enjoyment Factor? There are no spelling or grammar mistakes, at least none that I noticed, so that 3/10 in that catagory is completely wrong. This fic is completely original, so ErieDragon deserves more than a 4/10 in that catagory also. For Style of Writing, I personally think it deserves more than that, but that catagory is based almost completely on personal tastes. I think that you have no idea what you're talking about.
Oh, and one more thing... there are always two spaces after a period.
Fucking retard. | Reviewed By: jay On: August 07, 2002 06:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fuck u fuccking suck u fuck face faget.If i fucking knew where u fucking lived i would kick your fucking ass.Write things about horny fucking teenagers who have fucking sex in the fucking school bathroom and try not to get fucking caught doing it.Not some bullshit about vampiers,maiting fucking rituals and demons with a fucking ass heart. | Reviewed By: Vegetas Gyal [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2002 18:45 CDT
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^_^ Great. I must say that not much happened, but that's all right. We do know the reason why Nebumi was taken. The description was awesome, as always, and I'm awaiting the second chapter. ;) | Reviewed By: Vegetas Gyal [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2002 19:41 CDT
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Ooooo... interesting. It's a bit short and confusing, but I think that's because it's a prologue, right? It reminds me of ToD in that sense. This fic sounds really interesting, and I can't wait for the first chapter. ^_^ |
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