| "Ancient Feelings" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: loved it!!!
Reviewed By: Inkotoma [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2009 00:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just so you know I never review, but this story was so good I just had to. I loved you story!!! The ending was great, their little boy is so cute!!!
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Reviewed By: arizonasiren1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2009 07:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree it was a great ending. Keep writing your good at it....
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Reviewed By: arizonasiren1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2009 11:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent story. It is one of the best I have read. I love you writing. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to your next update.
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Reviewed By: isalen441 On: August 29, 2009 07:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
bit confusing in the beginning, bt d plot is pretty interesting.. im looking 4ward 2 c hw you are gonna finish it...
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2009 13:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this sure is interesting! You should know that you accidentally posted chapter fifteen twice, but other than that, it's great! I'm still very confused about what's going on, but I'm anxious to find out this big secret about why InuYasha and Kagome are acting this way. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Kawa-Misuterii [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2009 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't think you deserve flames at all. Although not particularly pleasant, obviously that...scene...in the second chapter has it's importance, and to be perfectly honest, things like that are a fact of life. Obviously this is a story that will have a deep, heavy reality to it, unlike the sunshine and rainbows you tend to get a lot not only on this site, but in a good majority of popular books. I applaud your expression, and the fact that you acknowledge that the...erm, scene (I'm not sure what to call it, sorry) would be distasteful to some. Keep going!
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