"Hidden Behind The Mask" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Lady_of_the_Night On: September 16, 2009 20:46 CDT Comment/Review: I would like to point out that you need to change the summary. I f Kagome can see behind Inuyasha's mask, you would have the series.
| Reviewed By: Ive got my forty Ounce and a System to Overthrow [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2009 21:40 CDT Comment/Review: Hmmm...it is pretty good for your first fan fic I think your off to a good start. It could use a little more detail, but all in all I've seen much worse. good job ^^
| Reviewed By: Ancient Spirit [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2009 16:02 CDT Comment/Review: I am a little confused as to how Kagome knew she was pregnate. Will you please explain.
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