| "Venom of Love" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: moomoo On: July 04, 2003 11:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay at first, but I could have done without the gay stuff. |
Reviewed By: Darcy335 On: March 18, 2003 17:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE!PLEASE! |
Reviewed By: Darcy335 On: March 18, 2003 17:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY BAYLEE! GET UR BUT OFF THE CHAIR AND START DOING MORE CHAPTERS! OR DO I HAVE TO YELL MY BUT OFF! YOU BETTER START WORKING ON THE FOURTH AND MORE CHAPTERS! I LOVE IT SO FAR... SO... FINISH IT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Kouji Luver [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2003 17:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Fic
You're a awesome writer! |
Reviewed By: Bronze Eagle [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2002 16:08 CST
Comment/Review:
It's Takouji!!! ^^ Yay. I love Takouji. I like your plot, and you have some great ideas, but all the spelling errors and the misuse of words makes it kinda hard to read. ^^;; Your English teacher probably tells you this all the time (mine does), but it really helps to read over your work. Sorry for telling you what to do, but I'd like to help you improve your fic. ^.~ Anyway, I can't wait to see what you have in store for those two!! Ja ne, minna-chan. |
