| "The Shinobi and The Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Hiroto [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2010 00:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, a moon princess based name. It's been a while since I've encountered someone who actually knows the story, and not the Inuyasha version. I've enjoyed your writing, it's fresh and clear, and doesn't contain horrible errors like so many others. I'm usually not a fan of the fanfiction that follow the canon closely, preferring AUs, but you've done a great job here. To be honest, Kaguya seemed a tad Sue-ish when I first started reading, but I've come to like her quiet determination and caring nature...she's the perfect foil to Sasuke's cold and calculating personality. I'm looking forward to more of the Shinobi and the Miko.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2009 19:29 CST
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Neh, it's just kinda hard to have the effort and will to always leave a review, ya know? I usually try to give a generally encouraging message on ff.net, but here I do so too, on occasion. In any case, continue to update and all that jazz, it's not easy writing, even if it's fanfiction! So, again, update again soon, will ya? Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Leo-chan On: December 19, 2009 16:50 CST
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Forgive me for not writing another review after reading. I know my input is valued and so I am at fault. Yet I still think your stories are exquisite. Please, continue writing. Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2009 20:44 CST
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Hmmm, very interesting. Continue to update, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2009 20:02 CST
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Hmmm, interesting. Continue to update, will ya? Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2009 04:37 CDT
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Hmmm, interesting use of empathy, not something I've seen so far, and for combat use? It's quite different, and a concept I'd like to know the origins of, something you come up with, or you read? Could you tell me? While based on Kaguya from Inuyasha, she's definitely different, and a unique take on the character. So, continue to update, will ya? Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2009 10:11 CDT
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I blush. I don't mind the shoving of stuff in my direction. Contrary to what you may believe I enjoy it. Both of your stories are very good and I enjoy your banter when you send them. :) I liked how you reworked some of the bits in the story. I think that it added to the flow alot better then what I suggested. Just remember that you rock! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Leo-chan On: September 15, 2009 18:38 CDT
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You're stories are very interesting. I love how you write them, and I always look forward to new chapters. Keep it up, I wouldn't want to miss out on lovely writing. =)
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2009 10:49 CDT
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Ohayo Kiku! I liked the update even though it was on the short side. I feel for the girl. I mean seriously, I understand Sasuke's motives for keeping her in the dark, but not talking to her..stupid teme. I'll help you out if you still need a beta. I am not the best, but I am willing to try. You can contact me at buzzk97@yahoo.com tootles!
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2009 13:57 CDT
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Ohayo! Nicely done. I wished that it was a bit longer though. So Sasuke is starting to develop feelings? Hmm, I wonder what Uchiha love is like: secretive or public? It makes the mind wonder. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Kinumii On: August 07, 2009 11:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was very exciting. I absolutely love this story and I am always excited when a new chapter is up! I am also thrilled that I found a great story since I looked everywhere for hours and I couldn't even find a half-way decent one. But this! This is absolutely divine! b(=^_^=)b My kitty give you two thumbs up! =P
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2009 23:12 CDT
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So I have read everything up to this point (chap15) and I really like what I see. It's different, but works within the confines of the manga story line. I like the details that are added upon her return to her village; the white hair and the like it helped me understand her a little more. please keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Murasaki12 On: July 22, 2009 02:13 CDT
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Wow, I really like this. The story comes into it's own around Ch 4. Not that it's bad before that. Your OC is not a Mary-Sue, so that's nice lol. There are too many of those around. Keep it up!
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