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| "Chained to the Whirlpool" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: Review
Reviewed By: nekotenshihime On: October 04, 2012 10:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read the whole fic and I must say that this was one of the most interesting fics I ever read! I admit I was quite sad that Naruto did not have Hinata in his harem. I am a strong Naru/Hina fan and not a fan of Saku/Naru unless it is done well. I must say you have surprised me with the characters and the plot as well. The only thing is you left it on such a cliff-hanger! Even half a page or more just til Naruto got home and sees Temari again would have been satisfying. Please can you update one more ch? It was well done and I would enjoy reading more of your fics. Thanks so much. | Title: Sexy
Reviewed By: ummx On: February 11, 2010 19:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read, the first chapter and it was great. I hope you story keep on going
| Reviewed By: dt On: November 23, 2009 19:55 EST
Comment/Review:
you know you havent posted chap 30 on AFF.net
| Title: Opinion
Reviewed By: Eh? On: September 05, 2009 23:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I've read this fic out of curoisity and i have say DAMN. Ok i went and read the first three chapters slowly and then i began to skim through the rest and then went to AFF.net for the rest of it. Too much hardcore BDSM, thank you though for the warning with the lasting chapter it didnt shock me as much. But honeslty i dont think ill really read this fic for these reasons. #1. I am a NaruHina fan, so i was kinda hoping that she would have been more directly involved. Hell im positive you could actually write a decent NaruHina fic. I would find more appealing had they been a couple and the slave masters of ino and sakura. Sort of like slaves of the maelstrom or shadow leaf dance, not real hardcore bdsm fics but still good. I can picture the shy girl become a domme, thanks to either naruto or anko or even kyuubi, and break sakura to be naruto's pet, but thats just me. (Im not that big of a sakunaru fan, i dont hate sakura but i prefer the NaruHina, unless it some sort of harem fic) #2 The story is way too focused on torture, i mean i know its your fic but still back off a little for the love of god. #3 Plot is...i dont know what to say expect that it needs some revising. Other then that, an original and well written fic, one that i will not be reading anytime soon in the near future.
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