| "A Debt Fulfilled" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: ohh!
Reviewed By: twilightluver [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2010 10:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn that was good. i personally think that you should do a Vegeta/Bra or OOH! a Goku/Bra that would be extremely hot! :D
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Reviewed By: James Smith On: September 22, 2009 21:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like the sound of no.12, but I hope that the reason they break up is not over any infidelity or anything like that. I really don't want to read about Gohan being a cheater :[ I also really like the sound of no.2 and no.9. So these three fics get my votes (though I'd read any 'G/V/nobody-else' fics you had planned :])
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Reviewed By: FIERY MINX On: September 22, 2009 20:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi, I love G/V fics! I'd vote any of the strictly GV fics you have listed. But I particularly like 9, 12 and 13! Please don't write any more G/non-Videl fics. But anyway, keep it up! Thanx.
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Reviewed By: KitKat18 On: August 27, 2009 15:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Thank You! I love G/V and it seems that there is hardly no smutty fanfics (when compared to other couples)out there! You should do 12 or 2 or 3! I really can't decide. LoL! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Gaskin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2009 03:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I so want More! Thanks for writing this. We never have enough Videl/ Gohan or Videl/18/Gohan stories out there... I think you should write #12 or #3
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Title: Loved it!
Reviewed By: MsuSpixieFan On: August 18, 2009 03:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story! For you next story I think you should write either: "12. What once was lost" "13.'See me after class...'" or "2. Persuasion". We need more Videl/Gohan lemons!!
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Reviewed By: b123 On: August 12, 2009 07:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I injoyed this and lastly I would vote for the fic A day of Confessions - Gohan/Bra/Videl since I liked the previous ones to it. So anyway keep writing and hope to see my vote soon.
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Reviewed By: Dragonfan On: August 10, 2009 23:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry for the ratings.. Your style in the first chapters were good. I was a fan. But your writing in this part is very RADICAL.. especially the TRANSVESTITE PART... Disgusting
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Reviewed By: GodModeGOD On: July 26, 2009 21:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 1 was great. Chapter 2 was good. Chapter 3 was okay. Being that I was there for 18, I suppose this explains things, though Videl is good too. Option 4 or 6 would be desirable. Pity no options for future Gohan/18 existed. I prefer the idea of Gohan being 'rewarded' by 18 on a more timely basis.
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