Reviewed By: Fatal Mars On: July 29, 2010 19:49 CDT Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: I really liked it the start was a bit raunchy for DBZ, but the second part made up for it! Fabulous! AH I love this couple! I love that his eyes weren't innocent part! CLASSIC! Great job I am a fan.
Title: I'm glad this wasn't food Reviewed By: Random Girl On: September 16, 2009 09:17 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: That line made me LOL! You are a very good writer and your story made me smile. You mange to do what few authors can which is keep the characters in total character. Well done!