| "You Are My Future" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2009 10:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this please when you get the chance update soon ;-)
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Reviewed By: Kula [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2009 21:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiei/Kagome/Kurama (Non-Yaoi)
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Reviewed By: Aya177 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2009 01:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hiei/Kagome/Kurama fro sure but i like it
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Reviewed By: ryuuhime88 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2009 01:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
interesting i never pegged kagome as a gun girl...^__^ lol keep on writing
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Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2009 17:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well it could definitely use going over by someone since you have material & marital arts instead of martial arts in the start paragraph. You also have were/where errors, I think every place you used where should be were instead.
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