| "One night" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Reviewed By: rbabygurl520 On: July 24, 2002 17:03 CDT
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Looks good so far.Please update soon. |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2002 16:47 CDT
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*shakes her head* Has ME curious sorry.. alone.. in the dark.. with Vegeta.. hehehe |
Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2002 16:46 CDT
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it's a good beginning.. has be curious :) |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2002 14:54 CDT
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This was awesome! I loved this! :) |
Reviewed By: Missy On: July 29, 2002 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey wat up!! I just want to say you are very talented. One thing that you should do is make Vegeta more rough and tough because he is a very (sexy...but)stubborn guy and doesn't express his emotions to much. But Hell You ROCK!!! Keep those damn Chapters comin!!:) |
Reviewed By: Missy On: July 29, 2002 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey wat up!! I just want to say you are very talented. One thing that you should do is make Vegeta more rough and tough because he is a very (sexy...but)stubborn guy and doesn't express his emotions to much. But Hell You ROCK!!! Keep those damn Chapters comin!!:) |
Reviewed By: Buffygirl101 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2002 02:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How dare you!!!!.. How the hell can you write such a damn good fic and not finish it. Do you now how mad i was when the 7th chapter was over. I as furiouse. You haven't finish it. If you don't I well cry. I am seriouse too
~Buffygirl~ |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2002 23:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, didn't expext that to happen!! Oh well, Good chapter none the less!! Man I'm never doing a S. Hunt ever again!! Haha...jp |
Reviewed By: Bulma Wannabe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2002 12:02 CDT
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Update soon. I want to know what happens next!!!
^_~ |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2002 04:13 CDT
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THat's a pretty good lemon!! I couldn't do any better. I tried bealive me..haha. IT's like something a grade 4 typed in Sex Ed.
CONTINUE!! |
Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2002 12:15 CDT
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This is going to be really good. I have a feeling... |
Reviewed By: Tiffers On: July 24, 2002 12:35 CDT
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Looks good so far!! Update soon, I think it has real potential!! |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2002 05:22 CDT
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I guess Vegeta's plan didn't work. What would have Bulma found? Will Vegeta make it up to Bulma? I MUST KNOW! |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2002 01:58 CDT
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OMG! Please tell me you're going to finish the chapter! O.O |
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