"One night" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shastania [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 11:35 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Awww, it's over.. :(
I like this ficcy very mucho and i'm sorry to hear about the ComicCon. Hope you make a sequel to this ficcy! It kicks ass!
I never imagined Vegeta to be 'friendly' like that, but you write his character beautifully, dearie! Looking forward to seeing more of your work! |
Reviewed By: ur mom On: August 12, 2002 01:45 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: i dunno how 2 explain it, but keep up te good work and u better write the next chapter soon |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2002 09:58 CDT Comment/Review: AwwwW!But this story was so cooL!I want more. |
Reviewed By: Dark Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2002 18:41 CDT Comment/Review: Noooo. must read more*gos searching throw
e-paper* :'( no more right now *crys like Serina from SM*
~*~Dark Princess~*~ |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2002 18:27 CDT Comment/Review: The latest chapter was great! What will Bulma find? |
Reviewed By: Krop J Z12 On: July 28, 2002 22:53 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I think this is a great story coming thru can't wait till the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: chatcat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2002 05:40 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Weeeeeeeeeee! Me liking very much ^_~ OO! UPDATES!! |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2002 22:16 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: AWwwwww!! That was sooo cute!! ^^ HEe hee yay they are all happy again!! ^^ |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2002 05:02 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: *gasp* POOR VEGGIE!1 *sniff*
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Reviewed By: yume On: July 25, 2002 23:39 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: very cute story so far, you're writing style is pretty good, can't wait to read more ^-~ |
Reviewed By: louie On: July 25, 2002 10:37 CDT Comment/Review: Vegeta is being so sweet!!! UPdate ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2002 05:51 CDT Comment/Review: oooh! A romantic scene already being set! :) yay! Update soon. |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2002 00:00 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I wanna know how to use ki!! It's so nifty!! ^^
Hee hee
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Reviewed By: Me On: July 24, 2002 22:36 CDT Comment/Review: great fic, please update soon!!! VERY SOON! |
Reviewed By: Dark Princess On: July 24, 2002 18:32 CDT Comment/Review: Veggie talking in a high piched voice? thats too scary to imagen.
must read on,
~*~Dark Princess~*~ |
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