"Vegeta's Niece, Vene" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Kween_of_saiyans [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 02:35 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This was really cool and awesome. Can you PLEASE update soon, i want to know what happens next
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Reviewed By: LifeSenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2002 12:45 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review: I liked it! I didn't know you could write serious fanfiction...for your first, this is pretty good. The only thing I suggest is a bit more detail and a little pre-reading.
I can't wait until you post the next chapter. I'm really curious...The whole plot is interesting. |