| "Tales of a Wanderer" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: DawnFireice [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2009 11:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
My mistake I am so used to Kagome having blue eyes in all of my stories that I forgot I had them brown in this O.o Sorry!
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Reviewed By: LestatsDarkAngel(NSI) On: October 19, 2009 03:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh and one more thing lol. In your desc, you say that Kagome's eyes are blue but you've made them brown X3. OR is there someone else coming along with blue eyes? O.o?
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Reviewed By: LestatsDarkAngel(NSI) On: October 19, 2009 03:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay, more chappies. I am happy to see that you've taken my advice and your chapters are coming wonderfully. I do hope that you make a way where Kagome and Kenshin can be together forever. While Kaoru is great, I guess I really just don't see them being together ever lol she'll always be a little sister in his eyes. But yesh pwease lol. I would like to see KAgome and Kenshin have a happy future ^_^ and great job and good luck with this and all your future stories. :3
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Reviewed By: my3rdeyes [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2009 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
agree with "LestatsDarkAngel".interesting story and hope you continue.peace!!
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Reviewed By: LestatsDarkAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2009 02:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hello :3 So far it seems to be quite an interesting story. A few pointers however. 1) Put your paragraphs into smaller sections. Big blocks of text are hard for your readers to go through because it just seems like a lot to read. Also it'll be easier to follow along. 2) A little more descriptive and clear as to certian things that may be happening in the story. 3) Also you might want to fix your alignment when you write as some of the words in the beginning are cut off ><
Over all nice work and I hope you do well in your stories ^^ Ja ne and good luck :3
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