"The Fire Within" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Kigarii-Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2013 01:18 EDT Comment/Review: WAIT...KAGOME WUZZ GONNA MATE YUSUKE TOO…Right?So WHUT happened to him. But all aside Great story!!! :O |
Reviewed By: wrfsret On: July 05, 2011 15:22 EDT Comment/Review: so this is a kagome/2 guys pairing. Why all crossovers have MMF pairings? Its yucky. |
Reviewed By: DragonKitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2009 10:41 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG! this story soooooo deserves more than just a measily 3 reviews! I bow to ur greatness! the whole threesome thing goin on between Hiei Kagome and Kurama is EPIC! *favorites story and author* I'm trying to write a threesome fic as well, but it pales in comparison to this! holy hell! I'm only half way through and i was hooked on chapter ONE! haha!
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Reviewed By: kaira2828 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2009 21:56 EDT Comment/Review: i love the story wish it ended better but all in all it was awesome wish there was more!!
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Reviewed By: Dusken_Dreamer53 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2009 07:10 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I'm proud to present you with your second review. It better make you happy cause I stayed up till 7am to finish reading this amazing story of yours. Now I believe I will quite literally go and crash. I need sleep if I'm to wake up and chat with you later- at least coherently. 5***** story btw. I just love your writing.
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Title: LOVED IT! Reviewed By: Youko'sVixen On: August 01, 2009 17:01 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG MMMM Azing!! Loved it to death girl!! I'll definitely have to like read your other fics! This one was like funny and action filled ;) wasn't bored for a second while i was reading! and i totally like that you posted the entire story in like one day. Now i dont have to wait for you to update and hang off the edge of my seat to see what happens next! Hehe you know what would be really funny thou? if like kagome got pregnant!!! She would have to wait and see whose kid it was! HILARIOUS! but anywhy, i loved it :D great job!
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