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| "No Such Thing As Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] | Reviewed By: Fairy goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2009 00:47 EDT
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I can't wait to see where this is going. I don't think the twist was to much, it was unexpected that's why I like it, it peaked my curiousity. Just like I wonder how was Kagura caught. I don't hate her, I kind of like her but I think she is a bit of a chicken and shelfish but I can understand her need to be free of freak like Narku. I can't see her caught like that, she has to much pride. Sometimes she reminds me of Sesshomaru, (her coolness. When is Kagome going to stop getting beat up and start beating up? I can't wait for that. I read in your closing remarks that it's your third year of college, it's last this year and I'm already a mess, it's only been two weeks and I need a break! Good Luck. I can't wait for more, I want to see what the little old Kami saw that made him curse in a temple. Oh, I'm glad her guardian knows that Kagome is trainging and okay. Till next time Write on! Much Love Fairy Goddess/Jeweled Fairy
| Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2009 18:47 EDT
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I cant say I really like this latest chapter , the rest where awesome but this last one bothered me , the twist was a bit much for me , I really dont see how abuse of kags to force training on her helps the story at all , I honestly do love this story but its gotten a little bit overly confusing now , not trying to sound like a flame just a opinion thats all
| Reviewed By: Ive got my forty Ounce and a System to Overthrow [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2009 09:06 EDT
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I never thought I could hate Kikyo more than what I already do, but I was proven wrong. I am really looking forward to the update and can't wait to see how things turn out for Kagome when she sees the gang again. And Sin reminds me of my friends weird twelve year old brother with the way he gets bloody noises when he is at his pervert peek haha...and the creepy god child is an interesting twist. anyway the story is great ^^
| Reviewed By: mariposa_miko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2009 04:49 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! amazing!! please update soon! i want to know more! and please let this be a Kag/Sess pairing!!! i LOVE that pairing! what happens with Jiji and Shippo? they must be so worried. and How will Kagome turn out with all the training...and i dont have a good feeling about this Kami-sama is he really a good guy? please please update soon. You are an amazing writer!! and i am dying to know more...also Sango is Kick Ass amazing! i love her attitude! also i love Jiji and Kags relationship. its awesome that he protects her as if she is his child :D anyways this is on my favorite stories list and i cant wait to get the email telling me that you just uploded a chapter! Good luck and just know you have a new fan :D
| Reviewed By: Fairy goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2009 01:08 EDT
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I read your new chapter, I can't believe that I also have this story on another site maked as a favorite! I was happy to read it on both sites. My name on the other site is InuAngel. I was excited to recieve your email and the information that chap 6 was up! Squeals I went right to reading! Made my night. Your awesome, I can't wait to learn about her training. Will her hair grow back fast? Excellent story I'm really enjoying it, I have nothing bad at all to say about it, except FASTER UPDATES!!! I'm always so impatient, sorry about that. Your updates are worth waiting for. Till chap 7 Write On! Much Love Fairy Goddess
| Reviewed By: Shinobi No Tenshi On: August 24, 2009 00:36 EDT
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Well, those people sure are mean. :P Hope she won't change her view about demons anytime soon. And she better kick ass! ^^
| Reviewed By: Althea2005 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2009 00:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. Very original, just love the jiji. I can not wait for more of this.
| Reviewed By: Fairy goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2009 23:28 EDT
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OOOOPS! I'm Fairy Goddess on this site! Jeweled Fairy on another! Well we are both fans of your story!!
| Title: No Such Thing as Fate
Reviewed By: Fairy goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2009 23:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't read fan fiction to grade them on grammar, I read for content, uniqueness(sp), plot and so forth, I believe that spelling and grammar are improved with writing. I'm really loving your story, I love the characters, your version of Kagome and Shippo. I love how Kagome is learning new things that will help her to grow strong and smart and eventually will make her lone journey easier. It's not the typical she leaves and get hurt and has to be saved, not that those beginnings aren't good, but your fic is refreshing and something new. Good going, I can't wait for reviews. I love getting to know your characters it's as if I can see them, I can feel what they feel. You are doing a great job and I'm loving it! Your excellent I can tell you really are enjoying writing this story. The only thing that bothers me a bit is that you sorta threatened to not post unless you get reviews. I understand reviews are good for direction and motivation, but you don't need it, your excellent! You don't need reviews for approval of your writing abilities, you just need confidence. I've read plenty of finished good and bad stories with zero reviews, now those authors have confidence and belived in their work, they had a story tell and they told it. You are on your way to telling an excellent story that has me checking two times a day or more for an update! Reviews can be great and uplifting, but don't use them to continue what you are doing. I know I don't have any thing posted and maybe I shouldn't say anything, that's why I don't flame, it's rude and uncalled for, I believe anyone brave enough to post and put themselves out there deserve proper respect, good or bad story. You are excellent! I'm looking forward to the males that Kagome will have to chose from!!! I can't wait to vote, which is a good idea that you are involving your fans, I am most definately a FAN!! Continue the good work I can't wait for more, I have no advice for your story in the area of what should happen next, because I think you are doing great and I can't wait to see where it goes! EXCELLENTLY AWESOME WORK!!! Write on! Much Love Jeweled Fairy
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