| "No Such Thing As Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2010 23:41 CDT
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meant to review the day you put up the new chapter but I got caught up in life :) but here I am to say thank you for giving us jiji back. :) no matter how short he will be in....
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2010 22:30 CDT
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woohoo an update. sorry really happy to see an update though this is one of my favorite stories. a few typos in there but not so extreme they distracted or detracted from the sotry. I can't wait to find out what was in the lake or how kagome's training goes. Loved the image of Jiji with his hair on fire frowning at shippou. I hope to see/hear more from Jiji soon.
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Sango Tajiya [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2010 00:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...You've made me speechless. This story is fucking AWESOME. I love the storyline, and the way you've formed Kagome. It's great. You've kept the story real to the actual show, and yet, you've made it more... REAL because you gave them human problems that would occur in that time. Kagome's forced marriage was something I didn't expect, but greatly enjoyed. I DID expect that the child belonged to Sess, but I wasn't sure you would add that twist. I was so upset that he died though. You character Kuro... god I love Kuro. Out of all the tearjerkers in the story, his goodbye to Kagome and the events that followed to his death almost had me sobbing. Actually, I'd hoped that you would make Kagome's child Kuro's incarnation. lol. In a way you did make it happen. I also appreciate the plot building you formed between Sess and Kagome. Like you mentioned, you're not just throwing them at each other and they completely fall in love. It makes the story more real (which I already gushed over.) By far, my favorite person in the whole thing is Kuro. I can't WAIT until he starts talking!! Anyways I can't wait until the next chapter! Hope nothing horrible happens to you and you Don't get writer's block or anything like that (knock on wood) Thank you Sango P.S. - Having Kuro pee on Sesshoumaru? Fucking PRICELESS. I lmfao P.P.S. - Is Kagome gonna have a confrontation between Inuyasha and Kikyo soon? If she does will you PLEASE just kill that bitch off? Kikyo needs to DIE.
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Reviewed By: mortalshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2010 17:08 CDT
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I'm so happy u finally updated.I really enjoy this fic and I was starting to think u weren't going to finish it which would be a shame.
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Reviewed By: kjpanny [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2010 01:09 CDT
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Ure wierd but i like tht abt u. the update was awesome!!!!!!!!!!! U didnt disappoint me.... I'll be waiting for ur next update eagerly...
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Title: Coming back?
Reviewed By: NanDeMo-offline On: September 16, 2010 21:05 CDT
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I just wanted to let you know I still think about this story, wonder whats going to happen with it. :) You really are a great writer!
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Title: Constructive Criticism
Reviewed By: SinsofDreams [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2010 03:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been reading this fanfiction for a while and I think the story line is great. Your character development of Kagome is amazing, I love what she's become and I love her relationship with Sesshomaru. But There are many times when I feel like scrolling down the page and skipping parts, maybe you could cut chapters in half and eliminate some of excess detail and dialog. Focus only on the juicy really important aspects of each chapter. Also I have trouble differentiating when a sentence begins and ends, maybe you and format it into more of a paragraph sequence? Anyway I think the story is great, love Kagome's fierceness. And props to you for having such dedication in continuing it. Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: wynterfrost1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2010 12:58 CDT
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love it please write more keep'em coming
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2010 19:46 CDT
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i missed this! :) thank you so much for the update!
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Reviewed By: kjpanny [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2010 23:08 CDT
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Come on, update already!
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2010 10:59 CDT
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>.< Love your updates and love your story. :) And hope Kagome keeps the baby :D
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2010 01:12 CST
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I LOVE YOU! Seriously :D This was very sad...:( the poor baby, but I am happy the demons got free.
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Title: Loved It!!!!!
Reviewed By: ITWASGREAT On: February 21, 2010 17:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello I don't really write many reviews but I just had to write one for you. I love your story!!!! I checked every day just to see if you had updated yet. The story is so unusual and creative. Its like nothing I have ever read!!!! I love this story and I really wish that you will update more. God sometimes I wish it was like a book so I can just go out and buy the book to read the story all at once. Thank you for writing this story and please continue your work. Quickly!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Elven_mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2010 16:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. And you are very good at leaving cliff-hanger endings and making people wonder what is going to happen next. And I'm guessing the baby is either A)Jerkwad-lord's baby with her powers B)Sesshoumaru's baby (cause that had gone on just before jerkwad showed up and the baby is a drain on her powers after all) C)Kuro (because the baby is a drain on her powers, I can see having a Kami in your tummy doin' that) or a combination of A/C or B/C. Personally I think that if the baby is Kuro it'd be nice for him to be born as a hanyou so he isn't as weak cause I felt sorry for poor Kuro. Plus Kagome would make an awsome mother for him. Well that's my opinion. But I'll love it no matter how you twist it! Anxiously awaiting your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2010 18:31 CST
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T.T omg I hope she is ok? I wanna know what was up with the boy :P plz update soon i missed you >.
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Reviewed By: DarlingAngel0565 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2010 19:50 CST
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I am really enjoying your story so far, I am determined to finish it tonight...
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Reviewed By: crissy-cris [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2010 00:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really enjoying your story, it is very rare to find a Inu story that I can stomach reading, but your's has definitely been added to the list. I read 10 chapters straight, but it is 1:00 now and I must get up in 7 hours. I will finish the other five later.
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Reviewed By: kjpanny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2010 10:43 CST
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hey its me kj. Your story is getting more and more interesting, but tell me, when dus seshoumaru show up?
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Reviewed By: mz.hk On: February 03, 2010 03:57 CST
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i love this story its awesome
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2010 00:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
>.< Will you marry me? :D you have made me the happiest woman on earth >.< I absolutely love your story! I am on the edge of my seat waiting patiently for your next update. :D
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2010 03:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I >.< Love your story!! I miss jiji! and sin kinda lol. I hope inu yasha goes all murder suicide soon. :P
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879NSI On: January 19, 2010 16:30 CST
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hmmmm could there be more to the little romp in the woods with fluffy? As always can't wait for the next update
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Reviewed By: GLily On: January 19, 2010 13:04 CST
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I have really enjoyed the story so far, and can't wait to read what havoc Kagome will cause, and what sort of bond will be formed between her and the mysterious youkai. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Shadow Walker Woman On: December 13, 2009 10:20 CST
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Loved the smut at the end. Passionate till the very end, both of them. (Though for very different reasons.) Loved the story.
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Reviewed By: CLashley On: December 11, 2009 11:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well damn!! I can't wait to see what happens when Lord High and Mighty regains his senses!! Love it, can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2009 00:11 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*waaaahhhhh* poor kuro!! that poor baby , but on a lighter note it is funny as hell that kags threw sesshomaru off kilter a little , I look forward to more
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Reviewed By: kjpan On: October 24, 2009 04:38 CDT
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OMG! I love this story! Honestly I'm surprised there are so few reviews. The story is funny, charming, and not to mention TOTALLY AWESOME! You've got to update more quickly and don't you dare abandon the story midway! You rock! We've gotta get to know each other. My fanname is kjpanny. Email me.
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2009 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
booya for kags !! I have been waiting forever for this chapter and I love it , I can hardly wait for more
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2009 04:06 CDT
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still really hooked on this fic and just a bit of annoying nay-say here. Sight is seeing site is a location. Also another read through is recomended there are still a few errors like repeating a phrase: he sat he sat down. Type of repeats i know that isn't in the story like that but it is similar to some of the errors. All together though nice filler and she's learned a new skill...although now i have to wonder just what type of god Kuro really is.
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Reviewed By: Ive got my forty Ounce and a System to Overthrow [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2009 01:02 CDT
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I didn't think the transition was too fast at all. I really like the story and can't wait to read the next chapter. Have a happy birthday too ^^
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