Reviewed By:darklady405 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2009 12:01 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: surprizingly this is a one-shot that can be made into a whole story. There is a plot, a setting and if thought about in detail it is funny. Many people write one-shots and leave you questioning whats next but have no where to go with it, you could do so much....