Reviewed By: aquila333 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2009 06:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story you have here. definetally original! what gave you the idea of a Mistyhiei pairing? i like how you explained the pokemon world in terms of YYH. the lemon could be a little more believeable but that's the only thing that i found could be improoved.
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