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| "All in the Family" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: Star_Charmed_Queen_118 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2009 11:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS WAS ONE OF THE MOST FAWKING FANTASTIC FANFICS/LEMONS I"VE EVER FAWKING READ!!!!! Throughout the whole thing, i kept saying ohmigod over and over, and biting my nails because i was couldn't wait to find out what was next!!! you have serious talent, *even if it does please the gutters of our mind* i've shared this fanfic with just about all of my friends, and even the ones *guys* who don't enjoy the yaoi factor, love it!!! you have completely personafied the phrase when life hands you lemons, write fanfics!!! i normally don't divulge too much into things like this, but it was so completely compelling! i couldn't help myself!!! AWESOME FREAKIN FANFIC!!!
| Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2009 13:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was AWESOME! I really liked it but I was so MAD at Shippou I was also surprised that he would do such a thing...SIGH... THANKS:"D
| Reviewed By: Inumimi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2009 18:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
I am really glad you continued the story. Would love to see how Sess handles having a hanyou child (or children)! I would not be bothered by people upset by the "evil" Shippo. There are fan stories that bash InuYasha, Kagome, Miroku, Sango, Sess, Koga and just about everyone else who was ever in the manga - its time Shippo got it too!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2009 01:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why did you delete this before? I hadn't even noticed it was missing until I realized all of the chapters say they were uploaded today, and not just chapter four. But either way, I remember this story back when it was only chapter one, and have been following your occasional updates ever since. I liked the latest chapter. Some people might have problems with how you portrayed Shippou, and I think I even remember you getting flamed for being a "Shippou hater" on one of your other stories, but the way I see it, his character simply worked out the best for the antagonist in this story. Some people make Kouga evil, or Kikyou, or whoever, so why not a bad Shippou from time to time? I had no problem with it, and found it refreshingly unique. Otherwise, I was curious as to how chapter four was going to differ from chapter three, as far as the lemon sequences, until I saw that you had Inuyasha turn human. That had certainly come as a surprise, and I applaud your realization that he would have different feelings about everything during his human night. To be honest, the idea of him being human from time to time had completely slipped my mind based on this particular storyline with all the "pack" business, a pretty bad oversight on my part, so I'm glad you touched base on a very important issue. Even though this is pretty much just a giant PWP for the sake of being a PWP, I always prefer it when such things have plots that at least remotely make sense, LOL. So I guess I'm rambling on long enough, but good work, and if you decide to make even more chapters to this, then looking forward to it!
| Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2009 22:50 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
interesting story... like it so far... wonder what's next... update when you can... please and thank you! is it done?
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