Title: Good 'n' Weird.
Reviewed By: Trout On: August 29, 2009 02:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great read, so far. My favorite part is definitely the writing style; It describes thing well enough to get a good picture but not enough to get boring, it conveys atmosphere really well, and there are sentences like "I didn't want to go on the rope swing because I didn't want to die at camp, at least not without a bear involved." and "He was in a suit with a matching hat, looking like one of those guys who were trying to inconspicuous but obviously not since everyone else around them looked normal." Those are AWESOME sentences. What's not to like? The grammar wasn't great. Tenses especially seemed to get mixed up a lot, but that's nothing a good proofread wouldn't fix. Poor Stephen. He is in such a depressing situation. Still, I can't wait for the next part!
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