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| "Sometimes These Things Workout By Themselves" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: Alexisminamino... On: October 28, 2010 00:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is interesting. Yoko does not come up much in stories that I've read, so I am very happy about him here, ooo secrets....
| Title: why'd you end it there?
Reviewed By: martianbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2010 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon. 10 reviews is a bit too much to ask for, I think. You'll be waiting a while with what little you have here. Please update soon! It's interesting and you have a good story going! Please update NOW!!!!
| Title: continue writing
Reviewed By: ruthie balboa On: November 24, 2009 23:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright, well, 10 reviews is a bit ambitious. I've read some great fanfics that had only 4 or 5 reviews. I would say that 5 reviews would be a lot but a number more attainable. The story itself is interesting. I agree with you that Hiei needs to be seme more often. I like how you had Hiei wanting more power and trying to deny any sort of love. I really think you kept Hiei in character, even if Kurama seems too delicate. I think people mess up Hiei soo much it's annoying and I think you should definitely continue the story because it's one of the few Hiei in-charater stories out there. Once you add a lemon or a bigger sexual scene, you will most likely get more reviews. Good Luck and don't let the Muses evade you. Sometimes, you just have to force yourself to start and then it becomes a lot better.
| Reviewed By: Sweet Envy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2009 11:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your style of writing. Anyway, The story is good so far, want to read more of it. Lol, anyway, I'll be watching, so please write more?
| Reviewed By: buzzk97 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2009 18:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love these two characters and I can see why you put them together. Hiei is definitely dominant!
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