Title: SMEXY!!!! Reviewed By: Yoru no Usagi-Chan On: March 03, 2011 15:02 EST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This was a GREAT yaoi! It was descriptive, and cute, and smexy. I could imagine what they all were saying and what they looked like! The story was well-written and not completely sex-driven. LO AND BEHOLD! GOOD PLOT AND GOOD SEX! GASP! I can actually see this getting published as a book! The one thing I didn't like was how Kaito started getting a little psycho, but in the end that got fixed. The couples were paired well too. Good Job, New Phenom! |