| "Card Captor Sakura - Altered World" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: KiTtTY On: September 02, 2002 05:37 CDT
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Please update soon, ive been waiting 4 agees... |
Reviewed By: Jemusuton On: August 12, 2002 13:57 CDT
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Christine-chan!
Well who on earth would have thought I'd find you here?! Btw, it's Jade .:giggles anxiously:. just thought I'd say it in case you didn't remember! I just came to here to cheer you on even though I do enuf of it in ff.net, lol.. but imagine my surprise seeming only 31 reviews =~.~= You deserve more since you've worked years on this fic! But it's okie.. From now on i'll cheer you on here and on ff.net, neahahaha!
Well I'd review your actual fic but I already did that on ff.net... Hmm.. Anything to review about... .:thinks hard:. Well I don't think I ever told you why I liked your fic so much eh. Let's see... Well I think you developed your characters very well, esp the new meanie Zhifei... He's a very original character and like I said before, he's an enemy from a different angle! Not just like my typical fic and all the others, he's not trying to steal the cards or anything, he's actually trying to hur Yelan and Xiao Lang... And with this character, you managed to reveal lil bits of the past of the Li family, which was extremely smart of you =^.^= Also, your story went really smoothly.. Not only did you completely maintain the original CLAMP plot, but you also managed to add your own lil story lines! Very good fic indeedy... But you know what I like best about your story, besides the originality? Sakura is still the same Sakura. Even though she's sixteen, you still kept her innocence without making her seem like a 12 year old... Great job...
As for critizism... I don't think I have any at all .:cheers Christine-chan on:. I'll tell you if I ever have any critizism to give you! Anyhow... I think this is about it... Can't wait till the next chapter! =^.~= Bye!
Gem |
Reviewed By: AnimeGrl On: July 26, 2002 14:07 CDT
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this is soo cool!!!! this fanfic ROCKS!!! *lookx* i think i'm the 30th reviewer. ^^' keep up the good work!!!! this story is AWESOME! |
Reviewed By: ashley-chan On: July 24, 2002 23:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::look of awe:: wow! such a good fic. this chapter was absolutely beautiful. i'm almost surprised syaoran didnt kiss her then and there. i loved the last scene between sakura and him. there was so much emotion and feeling. wonderful. this is one of those good fics i enjoy reading, not one that i do just to pass the time. (BIG COMPLIMENT) |
Reviewed By: DragonNeck [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2002 07:38 CDT
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This is Maria 225 speaking. Writing. Chapter 31 was cool. I can't wait to read the final chapter when Syaoran tells her he loves her. Unless you're going to keep going until... i don't know. |
Reviewed By: KiTtTY KaT On: July 14, 2002 21:41 CDT
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i really like your stories! pls update more often yeh?? |
Reviewed By: Cherry_Blossem_Sakura On: June 29, 2002 19:28 CDT
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I really like this fic so far.Please finish writing it.Please!! |
Reviewed By: DragonNeck [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2002 09:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story! Like Maria 225 said, I can't wait for Syaoran to tell Sakura his feelings! |
Reviewed By: Tomogirl (remember me?) On: August 30, 2001 08:19 CDT
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What r u doin' here all the way from ff.net!!? I just got the strange e-mail....to send my own fic here and got curious nuff to go here (but i dunno if i should send my fic).... ^_^Keep it up tho..! U know ff.nets bck on rite? K, bye! |
Reviewed By: Ashley Akaihi On: September 07, 2001 07:24 CDT
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I've recently become a big fan and i enjoy your work. ^-^ Keep it up. |
Reviewed By: Ashley Akaihi (me again) On: September 08, 2001 06:02 CDT
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BTW- Do you think that in the future you will be adding T+E to your fan fic? They such a cute couple, but S+S just might be cuter. (o^-^o) |
Reviewed By: Lilac_kamiya On: September 18, 2001 21:00 CDT
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Really cool fic...it's proably the first CardCaptor Sakura fic I've read...I mean they're are other but I haven't read them I don't think *lol* well anyways...man I wished I could get my hands on subtitle stuff it so much better then the North america verison cardcaptors....any who please hurry with the other parts...sorry I should rush...never mind my pleading I'm a writer to so I should shut my mouth lol...oka well this would be the long review I written before :)
~ Konbanwa Lilac Kamiya |
Reviewed By: LindaN On: September 24, 2001 00:44 CDT
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I've read the first 7 chapters of your story so far and this is really good! And I'm looking forward to reading more....thanks! Linda |
Reviewed By: Umi On: October 09, 2001 18:49 CDT
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I don't see why this has such a low rating...I suspect some people gave you bad ratings on purpose? Oh well...it's a good fic. Don't listen to the raters! All I have to say is that your writing style could use some imporovement but cool plot! |
Reviewed By: D-chan On: October 13, 2001 13:40 CDT
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Great story! Keep up the great work. |
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