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Title: Chpt 5
Reviewed By: random reviewer On: June 23, 2010 23:39 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Funny & nice. Maybe one more chpt before bedtime...
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Title: Chpt 4
Reviewed By: random reviewer On: June 23, 2010 23:17 PDT
Comment/Review:
Very exciting chpt, once again.
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Title: chpt 3
Reviewed By: random reviewer On: June 23, 2010 22:49 PDT
Comment/Review:
Your consistent; I like that. I am almost positive that your next chpts will be as good as the last three. I'm really impressed with the storyline and build up so far...
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Title: Chpt 2
Reviewed By: random reviewer On: June 23, 2010 22:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad this chpt is just as good as the first. I'll enjoy reading this fic...
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Title: Chpt 1
Reviewed By: random reviewer On: June 23, 2010 21:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an excellent first chapter. Really a great joy to read. Each character seems very well developed. I hope this continues for the next chpts...
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Reviewed By: random reviewer On: June 23, 2010 11:11 PDT
Comment/Review:
looks good. I'll try this fic out...
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Title: what for?
Reviewed By: Sylla On: June 23, 2010 10:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow! I can hardly wait for the next chapter! The tension, the tension! Good work, really. Syll
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Reviewed By: Sessylove On: June 23, 2010 09:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only reason that my rating on style of writing was so low is because it is hard to read if the spacing is not different. You should put a space between every different person speaking. I would look at other fanfic writers to see the general style, because without that spacing, it is very hard to read. Other than that, I am intrigued. I really am interested in this story, I just really wish the spacing were better. It normally would turn me off to reading something, and I can tell you, there are a lot of readers that will do the same.
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Reviewed By: midcat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2010 01:12 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want to begin by apologizing for not leaving a review for the last chapter!! I feel horrible and want you to know that the quality of your writing has continued to be excellent and your updates are really appreciated!! I had to deal with 2 emergencies here at home that left me spinning and with little time for the things I enjoy (One of them being your story!). +++ +++ I was very happy to see an update today and dropped everything in order to catch up and make sure to review and let you know that I am still your loyal reader!! :) --- --- Vishious really did a number on everyone!! Just as Kagura, I was expecting some horrible deaths or something like that, but I have to admit that making everyone not able to control their emotions could be a dangerous thing, and potentially cause more damage than just killing someone. I have mixed feelings for Kagura, sometimes I feel sorry for her, and some others I despise her for being a coward and giving in to Vishious demands! At first I was shocked at Ensei's words, but soon realized that something was wrong when Kagura tore onto Kagome. To See Sango & Miroku falling like that was sad, and what's more scary, is the effect the potion had on Sesshomaru and his father!! I fear that things said or done on the heat of the moment may cause irreparable damage to more than one relationship and may probably end in someone loosing their life at the hands of someone who will torture his/her self for the rest of their lives for something done while not able to control themselves! I hope that Kagome throwing up the stew has saved her from falling prey to the effects, but just in case I will keep my fingers crossed!! +++ +++ Before I leave, I want you to know that I really appreciate the work that you do in writing this story and sharing it with us! I know how difficult it is to think of the plot, the characters, the story line, and to put it all together for each chapter, so please know that everything you do is appreciated and that I hope your story will get the recognition it deserves! I look forward to your next update with anticipation! Thank you again for writing and sharing! Hugs: MidCat
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Title: UPDATE!!!
Reviewed By: midcat [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2010 17:32 PDT
Comment/Review:
YAY!!! ***Jumps up and down*** An Update!! Thank you! +++ +++ Sooooooooooooo those 3 little foxes are up to mischief and they sound absolutely adorable!! I stand by my first impression, Jolicia seems like the perfect spitfire!! I am sooooo looking forward to the next update!! I can hardly wait to see what happens with Inuyasha!! Please update soon!! Thank you for sharing!
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Title: Chapter 58
Reviewed By: midcat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2010 11:11 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Jolicia is a great character! I really enjoyed everything about her, and look forward to more from her!! The mysterious illness that has been killing females sounds very suspicious and I am dying to find out if it has any connection with Vishious. Another great chapter! Thank you so much for sharing, please update again soon and let us know what happens next!
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Title: Chapter 53
Reviewed By: midcat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2010 08:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ok, so you asked for us to tell you what we think right? Chapter 53 was good, but there was so many misspellings that it took away from the chapter overall enjoyment. In many places you wrote "Lard" instead of "Lord", and that distracted me from the story. I think this really is a good story, I like it very much so far, it is original and the way is progressing is really good, but I would recommend you get the help of a Beta, to double check spelling and grammar. This will greatly improve the quality and attract more people not only to read, but to leave reviews as well! So far, I love it, and hope you will continue to write, you are doing a good job!!
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Title: Chapter 41
Reviewed By: midcat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2010 11:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter!! I don't know why, but I really enjoy when Kagome stands up for herself! I am so tired of stories where she is this pathetic week, mousy woman who puts up with everything that is thrown her way!! I love the fact that you make her strong without being obscene and out of character! Sesshomaru has to learn to deal with Kagome in a more equal way and learn to compromise! Thank you again for sharing!
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Title: CHAPTER 35
Reviewed By: midcat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2010 10:41 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was AWESOME!! Having Kagome transform into a huge Inu and then fight with Sesshomaru was absolutely wonderful! I like the spark that she has in her spirit! It would be a cold day in hell when she submits to Sesshomaru's nasty way of dominating her!! Thank you for a great chapter!! I hope to see Kagome transforming sometime again in the future!! She sounds incredibly amazing!
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Title: Chapter 32
Reviewed By: midcat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2010 08:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wanted to say that I am really surprised about the lack of reviews to this story; so far I am up to chapter 32 and find it very entertaining. Sometimes is a bit gory and dark, but I try to be objective and see the story as a whole. You have a good talent, please continue to nurture it!
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