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"Afterthoughts of Discourse" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ]
 Reviewed By: Twillightfairy [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 14, 2010 16:29 CST
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Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I read this on ff.net originally and loved and now I find it's also here, and couldn't help but fave it here. I would love to see what comes next because I think this is one of the best preggy Heero fics I've found. Here's an idea if you need one Duo stays with Hilde a bit longer and finds just how difficult babies can be, while Heero and Mary get used to living in a family. Heero stays home to rest and the woman who wants to be able to play gram to his kids goes shopping with Mary for baby supplies. This is just an idea if it helps then your welcome and if it doesn't then oh well I tried. I love what's come so far and want to see what comes next, please update soon.
 Reviewed By: jamc79 [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 25, 2009 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love it...the story is unique, and even if the characters are ooc, I'm enjoying how the events are unfolding. Keep up the good work, I can't wait to read more. : )
 Reviewed By: BeyondSie  On: August 24, 2009 15:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
:o nice though duo is a slight bastard..well at the beginning, but i love it so far, cant wait for more ^^

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