| "A Second Chance for Heartbreak" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Kigarii-Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2013 00:59 EDT
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Baka Kurama... BAKA BAKA BAKA!!! D: Hmph. Oh well.....Update? Kurama was so stupid to do such things.. |
Reviewed By: vampitty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2012 01:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please keep writing this!!! i wanna read more!!! thank you!!! |
Reviewed By: Elemental_Dea [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2010 00:25 EST
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I really do like the storyline. Though it did take me awhile to grasp the time alteration from chapter to chapter, a bit rough on the transition. Overall I really do enjoy it and urge its continuance ^.^
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2009 04:22 EST
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there is an issue with your story you go from chapter 6 (by the notation at the top not the notation from the site) to chapter 10 to chapter 8 to chapter 10. so kinda missing 7 and 9 I was throughly confused when i had clicked chapter 7 to sudddenly having a scene of them in makai from her fainting at shippos arrival.
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Reviewed By: MichiruAOZ [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2009 23:04 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am very much enjoying this story, but have to agree with Rainstorm61879 that it seems more likely to be a H/K (my personal preference). I did notice something though while reading the latest updates, what shows as Ch. 7 in the listing actually seems to but all but he lemon scene of Ch 10 (or what you show is 10) but might be 9? I clicked through all of your chapters trying to make sure I didn't miss anything, but some have your chapter number listed and others don't. I can guess and try to follow so I don't get too mixed up, but I just don't want to miss anything too important, ya know. Overall though you are doing a good job, keep up the good work and I can't wait to see more! ^.~
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2009 03:38 EST
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playful and cute...although the begining part with her being with kurama is confusing as this seem to be headed more in the direction of an H/Kag pairing either way looking forward to an update
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Reviewed By: ladydeath31178 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2009 23:35 EDT
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this story is fabulous ! I cant wait for more
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Reviewed By: vikay09 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2009 12:37 EDT
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thanks :D, haha i know he was just to handsome to be a good boy! im gony go back the 2 years and explain how she came to be in this situation in the first place, it'll only be few chapters i think and then i'll pick up up from the prologue again and go on ;). i still cany decide my final pairing but!
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Reviewed By: pinksnowbunny101 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2009 03:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh please write more soon! Will you actually start the plot off in the present time or two years before? I think starting int he present would be ausome (always knew Kurama was shifty) but what ever you choose, i want to read more just the same.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2009 19:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great start!
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