"Feel" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Good, but... Reviewed By: GG On: May 16, 2010 10:33 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: I enjoyed this fic. But I was confused twice, when you switched immediately from Heero's POV to Trowa's without making in clear in the beginning of Chapter two, and when you listed Heero's eye color as first green and then as amber...his eyes are Cobalt (blue)
| Title: cute Reviewed By: OrlandosLover09 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2009 13:33 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: it was hot but cute a confused heero is cute!Cant wait 4 more
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